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Are these sentence correct,? One day when I was cleaning the house, listening to music, tried to carry the dining table in the corner of saloon to clean its under, it was too heavy and I was alone at home. I used all my energy to move the table, when succeeded got a bad backache, wasn’t able to move. At that time the door bell rang, it should have been my mom who had forgotten bringing her key with herself. I had to open the door so came to door with great difficulty and when opened it, just understood that there was no person at the door and the bell was broken. At the end I couldn’t clean up the house properly and went to bed for one week. 一天一遍打扫了家一遍听了音乐的时候,试着送大餐桌为了它的下。那套桌子太厚重。我在家独自。使用了我的能源以后就得坏腰疼,不能运。那时候家的门铃听来了,他应该是我妈妈望了他的钥匙。我得了开门,所以很困难去了门上就开了它。那时候发现了不为在门,门破了。到底不能干劲好了,一个星期休息。

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Are these sentence correct,?

One day when I was cleaning the house, listening to music, tried to carry the dining table in the corner of saloon to clean its under, it was too heavy and I was alone at home. I used all my energy to move the table, when succeeded got a bad backache, wasn’t able to move. At that time the door bell rang, it should have been my mom who had forgotten bringing her key with herself. I had to open the door so came to door with great difficulty and when opened it, just understood that there was no person at the door and the bell was broken. At the end I couldn’t clean up the house properly and went to bed for one week.



一天我正听着音乐打扫房间,为了打扫房间角落餐桌的下面,我试着移开它,但那个桌子太重了。我一个人在家,耗尽了我所有的力气,直到“腰酸腿疼”(an idiom)时,还是搬不动。这时,门铃响了,应该是我妈妈忘了拿她的钥匙。我必须得开门,即使很困难,当我开了门,却发现并没有人,而是门铃坏了。最后我还是没有打扫好房间,而是因为太累了,卧床休息了一周。
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Are these sentence correct,?

One day when I was cleaning the house, listening to music, tried to carry the dining table in the corner of saloon to clean its under, it was too heavy and I was alone at home. I used all my energy to move the table, when succeeded got a bad backache, wasn’t able to move. At that time the door bell rang, it should have been my mom who had forgotten bringing her key with herself. I had to open the door so came to door with great difficulty and when opened it, just understood that there was no person at the door and the bell was broken. At the end I couldn’t clean up the house properly and went to bed for one week.



一天我正在打扫房间,听着音乐,试着移开大餐桌,为了擦它下面。那个桌子太重了。我独自在家。耗尽了我所有的能量,当成功开始“腰酸腿疼”(an idiom),动不了了。(就在)那时,门铃响了,应该是我妈妈忘了她的钥匙。我必须得开门,困难地开了门。发现并没有人,而是因为门铃坏了。到底不能干劲好了,一个星期休息。

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