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    University is a place for preparing the students to become useful members of society, and a key factor for developing countries developing, so governments should take the pay special attention to this issue. My personal opinion is that accepting the same numbers of women and men for all majors is not reasonable. In continue (?!) I will more explain about it and I will make it clearer by some examples and reasons. (simply say: here are some reasons why.)
    Some majors like nursing are more convenient for women , because nature of women is that they are more patient and they can contact relate better  to patients with ill person in an easier way. For example, I can remember last year when I had to stay at a clinic for one night, there was two nurses -a man and a woman. The female nurse was so very sympathetic and patient.  She helped me a lot and caused because of her I get got better very soon.
    In on the other hand, there are some hard majors, like mechanical engineering or Electrical engineering, they that need an intelligent person (I think you need a better adjective here, especially since you mention arguing in the next sentence), and I think boys are more successful in arguing. I’m a student of electrical engineering and I can see that boys can understand courses easier than girls. also, at workplace, they are more activate (active) and beneficial because they have more creative minds in comparison with compared to girls.
    In conclusion, as I said universities shouldn’t accept equal numbers of both sexes in every subjects, experiments (or studies) indicates that men are better in arguing and women are better in some jobs like nursing, so it can make a good balance in industry, medical sciences and other parts of the society.
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    September 24, 2016
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    ,من زبان فارسی  را خيلي دوست دارم و می خواهم ان را یاد بگیرم ,من به فارسی اهنك زیادی مي كوشم آهنگ های فارسی زیادی گوش می کنم مثلا  مثل آهنگ "تا کجا" از آرمین رستمی امىن رستمى تا كجا من نمیدونم جرا اما من دوست دارم , در واقع می دانم, ان زبان زیبا است ,من کتاب های فارسی ندارم, كتاب خوب ياب نمىتوانم نمی توانم پیدا کنم.
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    September 24, 2016
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    The ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. All the efforts of people in the first and second decades of their lives is aimed at having a successful career. The question of whether the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school to be successful in a future job has long been a topic of controversy among psychologists in numerous circles and camps. Different responses could be given to this argument based on the cultural and educational background of people. However, as far I am concerned, I conspicuously declare that not only can a successful social life promote one's efficiency by enhancing his or her self-esteem, but also this ability is essential since there are no individual works nowadays. To start out with, a general consensus has yet to be reached; however, a majority of psychologists are of the opinion that the quality of one's social life influence his or her success greatly. As a matter of fact, people who are able to establish a healthy relationship with their colleagues, have a better feeling about themselves. The results of a new survey conducted by Psychology Department of Harvard University unveiled the fact that employees with better social skills were more efficient doing their job, while those experiencing tensions with their colleagues had difficulty concentrating on their job. My experience as an employee of a big corporate company corroborates to the aforementioned results of the study that the better you relate to people, the better you can do your job. The last aspect to elaborate on has to do with one of the undeniable aspects of modern life which is the importance of teamwork. Everyone acknowledge the power of minds together. With this in mind, the importance of social skills for success in a future job is quite obvious since there is no individual work today. For instance, a surgeon works with nurses, anesthesiologists, and other surgeons. Or an engineer works on a project with other engineers. Hence, good social communicating skills play an important role in success in a job. When all is said and done, by taking into account the above-mentioned arguments, I firmly support the idea that the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school for success in a future job. Last but not least, it is highly recommended that students should work on their social skills as well as their knowledge during their education.
    September 24, 2016
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    For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.

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    All the efforts of people in the first and second decades of their lives is aimed at having a successful career. The question of whether the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school to be successful in a future job has long been a topic of controversy among psychologists in numerous circles and camps. Different responses could be given to this argument based on the cultural and educational background of people. However, as far I am concerned, I conspicuously declare that not only can a successful social life promote one's efficiency by enhancing his or her self-esteem, but also this ability is essential since there are no individual works nowadays.

    To start out with, a general consensus has yet to be reached; however, a majority of psychologists are of the opinion that the quality of one's social life influence his or her success greatly. As a matter of fact, people who are able to establish a healthy relationship with their colleagues, have a better feeling about themselves. The results of a new survey conducted by Psychology Department of Harvard University unveiled the fact that employees with better social skills were more efficient doing their job, while those experiencing tensions with their colleagues had difficulty concentrating on their job. My experience as an employee of a big corporate company corroborates to the aforementioned results of the study that the better you relate to people, the better you can do your job.

    The last aspect to elaborate on has to do with one of the undeniable aspects of modern life which is the importance of teamwork. Everyone acknowledge the power of minds together. With this in mind, the importance of social skills for success in a future job is quite obvious since there is no individual work today. For instance, a surgeon works with nurses, anesthesiologists, and other surgeons. Or an engineer works on a project with other engineers. Hence, good social communicating skills play an important role in success in a job.

    When all is said and done, by taking into account the above-mentioned arguments, I firmly support the idea that the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school for success in a future job. Last but not least, it is highly recommended that students should work on their social skills as well as their knowledge during their education.

    September 24, 2016
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