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Gender Equality University is a place for preparing the students to become useful members of society, and a key factor for countries developing, so governments should take the special attention to this issue. My personal opinion is that accepting the same numbers of women and men for all majors is not reasonable. In continue I will more explain about it and I will make it clearer by some examples and reasons. Some majors like nursing are more convenient for women, because nature of women is that they are more patient and can contact with ill person in an easier way. For example I can remember last year when I had to stay at a clinic for one night, there was two nurses -a man and a woman- female nurse was so sympathetic and patient she helped me a lot and caused I get better very soon. In the other hand, there are some hard majors, like Mechanic and Electrical engineering, they need an intelligent person, and I think boys are more successful in arguing. I’m student of Electrical engineering and I can see that boys can understand courses easier than girls also at workplace they are more activate and beneficial because they have a creative mind in comparison with girls. In conclusion, as I said universities shouldn’t accept equal numbers of both sexes in every subjects, experiment indicates that men are better in arguing and women are better in some jobs like nursing, so it can make a good balance in industry, medical science and other parts of the society.

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University is a place for preparing the students to become useful members of society, and a key factor in a country's development, so governments should take special attention to this issue. My personal opinion is that accepting the same number of women and men for all majors is not reasonable, I will further explain about it and I will make it clearer by some examples and reasons.
Some majors like nursing are more convenient for women because the nature of women is that they are more patient and can come in  contact with an ill person in an easier way. For example I can remember last year when I had to stay at a clinic for one night there was two nurses a male nurse and a female nurse, who was so sympathetic and patient she helped me a lot and I got better very soon.
On the other hand there are some hard majors like Mechanic and Electrical engineering because they need an intelligent person, and I think boys are more successful in arguing. I’m a student of Electrical Engineering and I can see that boys can understand courses easier than girls and also in the workplace they are more activate and beneficial because they have a creative mind in comparison with girls.
In conclusion as I said universities shouldn’t accept equal numbers of both sexes in every subject because experiment indicates that men are better in arguing and women are better in some jobs like nursing, so it can make a good balance in industry, medical science and other parts of the society.
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University is a place for preparing the students to become useful members of society, and a key factor for developing countries developing, so governments should take the pay special attention to this issue. My personal opinion is that accepting the same numbers of women and men for all majors is not reasonable. In continue (?!) I will more explain about it and I will make it clearer by some examples and reasons. (simply say: here are some reasons why.)
Some majors like nursing are more convenient for women , because nature of women is that they are more patient and they can contact relate better  to patients with ill person in an easier way. For example, I can remember last year when I had to stay at a clinic for one night, there was two nurses -a man and a woman. The female nurse was so very sympathetic and patient.  She helped me a lot and caused because of her I get got better very soon.
In on the other hand, there are some hard majors, like mechanical engineering or Electrical engineering, they that need an intelligent person (I think you need a better adjective here, especially since you mention arguing in the next sentence), and I think boys are more successful in arguing. I’m a student of electrical engineering and I can see that boys can understand courses easier than girls. also, at workplace, they are more activate (active) and beneficial because they have more creative minds in comparison with compared to girls.
In conclusion, as I said universities shouldn’t accept equal numbers of both sexes in every subjects, experiments (or studies) indicates that men are better in arguing and women are better in some jobs like nursing, so it can make a good balance in industry, medical sciences and other parts of the society.

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