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sport. I love sport . I prefer to go to yoga and cycling.
I love sport. My favorites are yoga and cycling.
I regularly go to the gym. two times a week.

I go into the pool

I go to the gym twice per week and I enjoy swimming.

I do not like winter sports. skating, skiing.

I have the summer to ride a bike. I want to learn to snowboard and play tennis. I'm curious to try a parachute jump. I wonder horse riding.

I don't like ice skating or skiing although I would like to learn to snowboard.

In summer I cycle and I'd like to learn to play tennis. I'm curious about sky-diving and horse riding.


Well written! I would recommend you try to connect some shorter sentences!

good side/ bad side

I'm living  I live in Japan. (「I'm living」は間違っていないけど、この場合は「I live」の方が自然です.)
I have been to Australia as a homestay and that was so good.
I stayed with a host family in Australia and it was great.
Since then I wanted to live in Australia or other countries, not Japan in the future.
Since then, I have wanted to live abroad in the future.

Plus I came to see only bad things about the bad side of Japan. Japan has bad air, in tokyo there is a huge crowd there are always huge crowds, and people always look tired, traffic is busy and people are not open... I didn't like Japan so much.
However, I came to realize that Japan has some good points too.
Now I like Japan, though i still want to live abroad in the future.
Could you guys tell me about good things(or bad things) about japan, in your opinion?
Thanks for reading.


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Very well written, Barcelona sounds like a great city!
Keep it up!

I personally think that catching the tourist bus is the best option to see most of the important monuments of the city and also learn a bit of history though the explanation from the tour guide. However, if you want to go sightseeing by your own, you must visit the Sagrada Familia. Its structure is amazing. Moreover, visiting the Ramblas and their local markets are also a good choice too. I specially recommend you to visit these markets during the lunch time because you can find good restaurants there for a reasonable price. During the night, the area of the port is a good place both for eat and clubbing because there are a lot of restaurants and night clubs.

My city (barcelona)

I personally think that catching the tourist bus is the best way to see most of the important monuments of the city and also learn a bit of history through the explanation from the tour guide. However, if you want to go sightseeing on your own, you must visit the Sagrada Familia. The architecture is amazing. It's also a good idea to visit the Ramblas and their local markets. In particular, I recommend that you visit these markets during lunch time because you can find good restaurants there for a reasonable price. During the evening, the area around the port is a good place for both dinning and clubbing because there are a lot of restaurants and night clubs.