IELTS WIRTING TASK 2

The management of re-educational activities for inmates is a very difficult and controversial topic. If On the one hand, the imprisonment has to be thought of as punishment., oOn the other hand, serving a sentence should help criminals to be reintegrated in the society. This essay argues that inmates have to be allowed to get an education but , in addiction, they have to spend time in working for the community.

The first point is a juridical argument. A lot of legal systems and constitutions state that criminals have to be re-educated in order to give them another opportunity. Teaching them civics and the main aspects of a democratic and liberal society may help them in achieving this goal. Moreover they can realize the gravity of their actions and blames?.
Beyond a juridical point of view there are evidences that educational projects give benefits to the whole society as well as to the inmate. A lot of sociological studies have statistically provend a lot of improvements among the states which have invested more in this kind of activityies. The data collected by this these researchers havehas shown a gradual decreasing in the amount of offenses as well as in the number of reiterations repeat offenses per inmate.

However this these programmes are completely useless if they are not accompanied by other practical activities such as social works. The convicts have to be applied to do some useful job for the local community such as mantaining structures like a street or picking up the rubbish from public sites such as rivers or parks.

Overall it is clear that education has a central role in recuperating the criminals, anyway but they should not be seen only as passive entities. but They have to contribute actively to social needs.

Correction November 22

:My laptop doesn't have a CD player, so I can't listen to a CD with it.

:It was snowing yesterday. It had stopped but the snow piled up about five centimeters.

:What are your best 3 favorite movies?

:I brought a bottle of wine to give you half of it.

:I just left home. Tell me what happened there? Is everyone there? I'll be there in 10 minutes.

:You must have been up late last night, so you seem sleepy.
:You must have been up late last night, so you seem to takeneed a rest.
:You often teach me English, so you seem to be a teacher.

:Are we going to walk, or take a subway?

:He might have been angry when I missed a call from him.

:She has an older sister. The sister is 6 years older than her.
She must have been pampered when she was a child.

:My friend lives in the countryside. It's in northern Japan.

:Your drink will be ready at the bar.

:Let's meet up at H&M on the first floor.

:There are 2 ATM machines on the basement floor.

CUSTOMER COMPLAINT

Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to complain about an incident which occurred during my stay in your hotel on 18th – 20th September, with your room service.
I spent two nights in the hotel, and the last night I requested toasked the hotel staff that they wouldto give me up a wake-up call at 6:00 am, because I was going to catch a plane.
I felt extremely annoyed when surprisingly the next morning I received the wake-up's call at 7:00 am, an hour later than I had requested.
I had booked a flight to Spain at 8:30 am; however, as owing to the call delayeddelayed call, I was late, and as a result I missed my flight then I had to pay an extra charge of 150€ to join a later plane.
I feel that the hotel should take responsibility for this incident, furthermore I’m entitled to compensation of 150€ for expenses incurred as a result of the delay.
I also wish to express my dissatisfaction with the service, I would ask you to ensure that levels of service are improved in the future.

I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Lara M.

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a Huge pear

I found a Huge pear at a Korean market. The pear was four times bigger than a pear that I have known any pear I have seen. I was tasting some foods while shopping. I worried so much before I went a Korean shop because I have never been there and I have thought foods were the food was different with from Japanese food. I was wrong. There were similar foods. I would visit again soon.

I would like to try this "huge" pear. :)

A short letter

To whom it may concern,
As a student who can support myself now, I would like to assist a child of Project Hope who demands needs financial aids.
I wonder whether it is of convenience for youIf it is convenient, I ask you to consider two conditionsif two conditions are taken into consideration. In the first place, the child had better come from Shanxi Province in that I prefer to give assistance to a recipient from my hometown so that sometimes I can visit him or her. In the second place, providingif the child cannot otherwise go on with his or her education, it would be better because my help would exert a greater an effective effect on him or her.
I would like to help the recipient annually until he or sheher graduates from university. Firstly, the money will cover the tuition fee and other expenses at school. BesidesSecondly, I will correspond with him or her irregularly in case his or she is confronted with some handicaps at school. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Good luck!