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To whom it may concern,
As a student who can support myself now, I would like to assist a child of Project Hope who demands financial aids.
I wonder whether it is of convenience for you if two conditions are taken into consideration. In the first place, the child had better come from Shanxi Province in that I prefer to give assistance to a recipient from my hometown so that sometimes I can visit him or her. In the second place, providing the child cannot go on his or her education, it would be better because my help would exert an effective effect on him or her.
I would like to help the recipient annually until he or her graduates from university. Firstly, the money will cover the tuition fee and other expenses at school. Besides, I will correspond with him or her irregularly in case his or she is confronted with some handicaps at school. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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A short letter
To whom it may concern,As a student who can support myself now, I would like to assist a child of Project Hope who demands needs financial aids.
I wonder whether it is of convenience for youIf it is convenient, I ask you to consider two conditionsif two conditions are taken into consideration. In the first place, the child had better come from Shanxi Province in that I prefer to give assistance to a recipient from my hometown so that sometimes I can visit him or her. In the second place, providingif the child cannot otherwise go on with his or her education, it would be better because my help would exert a greater an effective effect on him or her.
I would like to help the recipient annually until he or sheher graduates from university. Firstly, the money will cover the tuition fee and other expenses at school. BesidesSecondly, I will correspond with him or her irregularly in case his or she is confronted with some handicaps at school. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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