Revised Correction

To italki stuff staff

How are you doing? Thank you for your e-mail. I could understand well tell that you were being snoopy nosy. Everybody knows that learning a foreign language is so very hard. It is said that the a person returns to a low level again when the person they stops studying a foreign language study for several months. And it is said that 50% of Japanese people who needs English skills for work cannot continue to learn English for longer than 3 months. Naturally Japanese people who does not need English skills cannot continue to learn English longer than them. By the way, I do not have to use English for work and daily life. However I have continued to learn English for 5 years. I have communicated with foreigners more than 370 times for over 1 year and 9 months on Skype. I write my about a topic and re-read it after corrections. And I answer the questions about my topic to from foreigners. Perhaps I would not be able to talk speak fluently, however I could can communicate with them by using an internet dictionary. Now my target is to become be able to explain my work in detail with in English. From now on, I will write about my work on in my italki Notebook.
Thank you for reading.

Please correct these sentences.

Toshi

1. Is it correct to say you was or you were? you were 2. Is it correct to say he/she/it will has or he/she/it will have? he/she/it will have 3. He was in Paris last year. I was in Rome last year. -is it correct? Yes, that is correct. 4. I have been in New York. I had been in New York. Is it correct and what does it mean? In which cases is it possible to use? Use "to", not "in". "I have been to New York." and "I had been to New York." are both grammatically correct, but have different meanings. Use "have been" to talk about most things in the past. Use "had been" when you are telling a story about something that happened in the past and need to talk about something further in the past before your story. Look up "english present perfect vs past perfect" for a better explanation. 5. I been in New York. is it possible to use? No. "been" is a past participle, so it must always be used with a form of "have".

To italki stuff [?]

How are you doing? Thank you for your e-mail. I could understand well that you were snoopy [I'm not sure what you mean by "snoopy".]. Everybody knows that learning a foreign language is so very hard. It is said that the a person returns to a low level again when the person they stops studying a foreign language study for several months. And it is said that 50% of Japanese people who needs English skills for work cannot continue to learn English for 3 months. Naturally Japanese people who does not need English skills cannot continue to learn English than them [I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.]. By the way, I do not have to use English for work and daily life. However I have continued to learn English for 5 years. I have communicated with foreigners more than 370 times for over 1 year and 9 months on Skype. I write my about a topic and read it [I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.]. And I answer the questions about my topic to from foreigners. Perhaps I would not be able to talk speak fluently, however I could can communicate with them by using an internet dictionary. Now my target is to become be able to explain my work in detail with in English. From now on, I will write about my work on in my italki Notebook.
Thank you for reading.

Please correct these sentences.

Toshi

Diary:004

This is my diary entry 004!
If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!

Diary 004
What three words would you use to describe today?
⇨I would describe today as ”Hong Kong” because I planed to go there with my best friend,”massage” because I went there for relaxing and ”part-time job” because I had my two part-time jobs in the morning and tonight at night. I enjoyed today and I'll enjoy tomorrow. I'll eat out with my high school friend tomorrow! So excited!