About Learning English

Actually I have actually studied English for more than ten years, I used to try my best to learn it in order to pass my tests, and luckily I succeeded in the end. I remember that I disliked it at first because I thought it was too difficult and too boring but by contrast now I am enjoy learning it everyday. Honestly, it's quite different from Chinese. In my opinion, Chinese is enough broad and profound, while if you use English, you can describe some feelings straight without any shyness.

I would appreciate it if you can help me to correct my diary. Good day!

I'm falling in love with a girl in Chemistry class.

When I was in the secondary school
I fell in "love" with a girl at another school

While we were sitting in the same class
She didn't talk much
and just kept quiet all the time
But when teachers called on her
to solve a Maths problem
Surprisingly, she did a really good job, 
which no one in my class could've done. 
I've admired her since then.

I've seen many girls who are good at Maths like her
But no one can compare to her
Humble and not trying to show off. anything
Just simple and always alone.

Her voice is not cute at all
Deep, slow, warm, and manly
But I really like it.

Her hair isn't longer like the others
It's not fashionable or fussy

Her eyes are brighter than anything else
No need to wear glasses
but I cant live without glasses

Although we aren't the same at all,
my friends usually say that I am really like her
I'm so glad to hear that

But the distance became longer
When she had passed the Maths exam with flying colors
And I was just a loser
I was no longer sitting in the same class with her

I haven't met her for a long time after that
Then when the entrance exam to a high-school started
On the day we took the exam
I met her again
She was chatting happily with her friends.
Suddenly, I realized that
She's not as chilled* as I thought    (I'm not sure what you mean by chilled. Maybe quiet or shy?)

But everything was collapsed
when I heard that
She joined the Chemistry class
And I joined the Maths class

Now, we're both in high-school
I still keep watching her every day
I really want to be her friend
but no matter how hard I tried
We are still like two streets
that never meet. at least one

Even though there are many pretty girls outside
My eyes just see only you

Because
We wore the same clothes on the first day at school
We tie our hair in the same way
We're both always alone all the time

Because 
You're the reasons that I keep studying hard
So I'll be able to continue studying at this school
So I'll be able to see you every day
So I'll be able to catch up with you

And the last thing is, I hope that
We can be friends someday
When we're brave enough to say
"Hi, how are you today ?"
"Would you like to be my friend ?"

This is really good, and it was fun to read!

To have friends

I was just taking a shower, listening to the musics, and thinking of my friends.
Last Sunday, I came back to Korea from Canada.
I cried a lot on the plane coming back to Korea. It was because I already missed my friends that I met in Canada.
I still miss them.
Sometimes I think that if I hadn't met them, I wouldn't be sad, I wouldn't have to miss anyone.....
but I keep thinking about it... I end up thinking that I wouldn't have these unforgettable memories.
I really thank my friends for showing up in my life.

There is a quotation that I like which is about a friendship.
Good friends are like stars. You don't always see them but they are always there.
So true!! Miss y'all

it's because you don't know the gender of the 'one person,' so 'their' is used as a gender-neutral pronoun (rather than 'he' or 'she').

Australia used to be known as "terra australis incognita" which means "unknown southern land" in Latin and I guess it eventually got changed to Australia because it wasn't an unknown land anymore

I'm a native speaker and I find Grammarly to be really good. I downloaded it a few weeks ago and it's so helpful because it gives an explanation of what would be the correct grammar rather than just pointing out mistakes.