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Reading to improve your vocabulary

Reading is especially good to improve our vocabulary and our conversations. This affirmation has been confirmed for scientists in all the world. Even thought, there are people that don´t read to much or don´t like to do it, what is a throwaway culture.

People that do not read are losing information and conditions to be a better person, with a better vocabulary and writting skills. One of the most reasons is when you'll meet a new person, a important person, and you've to talk formally and respectfully with her. Without the right words, that is, words that you know, you can use, you won´t get a conversation as you wish.

As a consequence, we've to encouraging the young people reading. The period of adolescence is closely connected to make important life decisions, and, with the right topics and good information, young people can make a good future professionals, and make world a better place to live.

Concluding, we have to keep in mind that lecture is important and necessary in all ages. The main reasons why when we imput something new, nobody can take this away from us. Knowledge is a gift for each one of us, and, of course, our deserving.

I choose the topic ''the more you read, more you learn''