Reading to improve your vocabulary

Reading is especially good to improve our vocabulary and our conversations. This assert has been confirmed by scientists all over the world (worldwide). In spite of this/Notwithstanding/Regardless of this, there are people that do not read very much or do not like to do it at all what is considered to be a throwaway culture.

People that do not read are missing information and conditions to be better ones with a better vocabulary and writing skills. One of the most reasons is when you meet a person who you should address formally and respectfully for instance, since without knowing to use the appropriate words, you will not get the conversation going as you wish.

As a consequence we have to encourage the young people to reading. Adolescence is closely connected with making important lifetime decisions, and with the right topics and good information, young people can make good professionals and make the world a better place (to live in).

We have to bear in mind that lecture(that keeping literacy?) is important and necessary in all ages. The main reasons why we pick up something new (or: learn new things) is because nobody can take it away from us. Knowledge is a gift for each one of us, and of course, it is our deserving.

I chose the topic ''the more you read, the more you learn'  

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Reading to improve your vocabulary

Reading is especially good to improve our vocabulary and our conversations. This affirmation has been confirmed for scientists in all the world. Even thought, there are people that don´t read to much or don´t like to do it, what is a throwaway culture.

People that do not read are losing information and conditions to be a better person, with a better vocabulary and writting skills. One of the most reasons is when you'll meet a new person, a important person, and you've to talk formally and respectfully with her. Without the right words, that is, words that you know, you can use, you won´t get a conversation as you wish.

As a consequence, we've to encouraging the young people reading. The period of adolescence is closely connected to make important life decisions, and, with the right topics and good information, young people can make a good future professionals, and make world a better place to live.

Concluding, we have to keep in mind that lecture is important and necessary in all ages. The main reasons why when we imput something new, nobody can take this away from us. Knowledge is a gift for each one of us, and, of course, our deserving.

I choose the topic ''the more you read, more you learn''

I did my essay! Help me with the correction

Reading to improve your vocabulary

Reading is especially good to improve our vocabulary and our conversations. This affirmation has been confirmed by scientists in all the world. Even thought, there are people that don´t read too much or don´t like to do it, which is a throwaway culture.

People who do not read are losing information and conditions to be a better person, with a better vocabulary and writting skills. One of the most crucial reason is that when you meet a new person, an important person, you've to talk formally and respectfully to her. +Without the right words, that is, words that you know, you can use, you won´t get a conversation as you wish. )<-- sorry I can't understand what you wanted to say.

As a consequence, we've to encourage the young people to read. The period of adolescence is closely connected to make important life decisions. young people with the right topics and good information   can make good future professionals, and make world a better place to live.

Concluding, we have to keep in mind that lecture is important and necessary in all ages. The main reasonsof it is that when we imput something new, nobody can take this away from us. Knowledge is a gift for each one of us and of course it is our deserving.

I choose the topic ''the more you read, more you learn'' (I am learner also but those are mistakes which I found. I think I corrected them in a right way)