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Hello Jon,
+ How are you and your parent? - Do you mean his father and mother? in this case, it should be "parents" instead of "parent". When you use "parent" it mean that you he lives/has only mother or father.
+ I was watching the TV when I received your email. - I don't think have "the" before TV
+ The last weekend I went to the cinema, I was watching a action film, it called “007”. - I think it should be "I watched an action..." because it's past sentence. ________
+ In the film there is a special agent of police that he fight against the terrorist. - it's should be "he fights"._
+Also this agent has many cars and many object by fight against the bad person. - I think it's "to" instead of "by' to mention his purpose. ________________
+This film is very interesting for you because has action and adventure. - Because + clause, Because of + N/Gerunds, therefore it should be "because it has..."__________
+Finally I want to say that I hope that you are going to the cinema and you will watch this film. - because this action (Jon goes to cinema) was not planed before, then you cannot use "to be going to do st". ____________
I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes. Luis ----_
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