A letter by My friend Hello Jon, How are you and your parent? I was watching the TV when I received your email. The last weekend I went to the cinema, I was watching a action film, it called “007”. I

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A letter by My friend Hello Jon, How are you and your parent? I was watching the TV when I received your email. The last weekend I went to the cinema, I was watching a action film, it called “007”. In the film there is a special agent of police that he fight against the terrorist. Also this agent has many cars and many object by fight against the bad person. This film is very interesting for you because has action and adventure. Finally I want to say that I hope that you are going to the cinema and you will watch this film. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes. Luis

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A letter by My friend

Hello Jon,
How are you and your parents? I was watching the TV when I received your email. The last weekend I went to the cinema, I watched a action film, it was called “007”.
In the film there was a special agent of police that he fought against the terrorist. This agent also had many cars and many objects by fighting against the bad people. This film was very interesting to you because it had action and adventure.
Finally I want to say that I hope that you are going to the cinema to watch this film.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Luis

A letter to My friend

Hello Jon,
How are you and your parents (or mom/dad)? I was watching TV when I received your email. Last weekend I went to the the movie theater (American version) or cinema (English), I watched an action film (or movie) called “007”.
In that movie there is a special police agent who fights against the terrorists. Also this agent has many cars and many objects (?) to fight against the bad people. This film is very interesting (for you) because it has action and adventure.
Finally I want to say that I hope that you are going to the cinema and you will watch this film.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Luis

P.S. Hope it helps )))

Hello Jon,

+ How are you and your parent? - Do you mean his father and mother? in this case, it should be "parents" instead of "parent". When you use "parent" it mean that you he lives/has only mother or father.

+ I was watching the TV when I received your email. - I don't think have "the" before TV

+ The last weekend I went to the cinema, I was watching a action film, it called “007”. - I think it should be "I watched an action..." because it's past sentence. ________

+ In the film there is a special agent of police that he fight against the terrorist. - it's should be "he fights"._

+Also this agent has many cars and many object by fight against the bad person. - I think it's "to" instead of "by' to mention his purpose. ________________

+This film is very interesting for you because has action and adventure. - Because + clause, Because of + N/Gerunds, therefore it should be "because it has..."__________

+Finally I want to say that I hope that you are going to the cinema and you will watch this film. - because this action (Jon goes to cinema) was not planed before, then you cannot use "to be going to do st". ____________

I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes. Luis ----_

A letter by (tal vez 'to' rather than 'by'?) My friend

Hello Jon,
How are you and your parent(padres= parents; o mom/dad)? I was watching the TV when I received your email. The Last weekend I went to the cinema, (. in English, every sentence should have only one verb in it). I was watching watched an action film, it (here again, every sentence could have only one verb in English. If you want to split it into two sentences, should be 'It was called')called “007(We italicise the name of films in English, same for books. Not quotation marks.)”.
In the film there is(was) a special agent of police that he fight(fought) against the terrorist. Also, this agent has many cars and many objects by (to) fight against the bad person. This film is (can be, should be. 'is' is indicative, a judgment. You can't really help your friend decide whether this film is interesting to him or her) very interesting for you because it has elements of action and adventure in it.
Finally I want to say that I hope that (it's not incorrect to keep it, but there seems to be too many 'that' in the sentence)you are going to the cinema and you will watch this film.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Luis

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