- They are interchangeable, but I would say that 'start' would be for something quite short term, which will be completed, for example, to start a race, to start watching a film to start preparing dinner and 'begin' for something a bit longer term, begin a project, begin to learn a language, or an activity which may be carried out intermittently, begin to tackle the garden. The use of either would be understood, this is a small distinction.0 votedApril 25, 20191
My first writing
I have been making my website lately, and it would be very helpful if someone could make a correction to make my writing sound more natural. The sentences below are what I wrote for the site.
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Hello, everyone. Welcome to my website!
My name is Rio, a Japanese female in my thirties living in Iwaki city, Fukushima prefecture, and working here in a dental field the dental profession
I have been studying English for over a decade, and I am also interested in learning other languages.
I often listen to music in Spanish, French, German and English, and love watching TV series with English subtitles.
There are many artists I love and I will write some of them: such as Charlie Puth, Ed Sheeran, RIDSA, Black M, Alvaro Soler, Daddy Yankee, Don Omar, Becky G, Anitta, SDP, Side and so on. Oh... I cannot write name them all
If there is someone who currently lives here and happened to enter has entered this' Website, please don't hesitate to say hello to me :)Really well written and the meaning is clear, just a few minor alterations to make it sound more natural. The words to take out are underlined and the suggested alternative in yellow (apart from the please that for some reason refused to be yellow)
0 votedMarch 10, 20191- Correzione per favore Mio marito è gallese è orgoglioso della sua eredità. Lui è amichevole e affabile. Anche lui ha molto patienza, particolarmente con anziani e bambini. È premuroso è una grande compagnia. Ma lui è un nottambuolo, io non sono. È impossibile per lui avere fretta nella mattina. Ha bisogna avere due tazze di tè e almeno un sigarette prima fare di qualsiasi cosa. Sopratutto lui è buono come il pane e io amo moltissimo.March 3, 201980
- No these do not sound natural but your meaning would be understood. To sound more natural 1. I am not in a good condition right now Or I am not in a good way. 2. Is it cold (if you are referring to the weather) or if you are referring to an item it would be Is there any cold meat (for example) Hope that this helps0 votedMarch 2, 20190
- Esercizio dire cose mi piace senza usare 'mi piace' - correzione e altre suggerimenti per favore Devo direi che ci sono molte cose che m'interssa. E la mia passione per i cavalli, che avevo questa ossessione tutta la mia vita. M'interssa proprio in storia. Credo che e molto interessante e importante sapere come si e formata la societa, e come vediamo il mondo. Penso che imparare una lingua straniera aiutare capire un altra punto di vista e per espandere orizzonti. Adoro il brivido quando posso comunicare con personne nella lingua. Preferisco stare fuori, adoro camminare in bosco con I miei cani, andare in bicicletta sulle piccolo strade, lavoro nel mio giardino e cucinare I produtti da lo. Non credo di essere molto brava a ordinare il mio tempo libero, non ne ho mai abbastanza.February 8, 201960
- Channing let the sunlight find her face - a poetic way of saying that the sunlight was shining on her face Bones pressed too tightly, etc - is a way of describing that she was looking gaunt and tired. Pulled her hands free from her pockets - she took her hands from inside her pockets, probably with some reluctance. Hope that these explanations help0 votedJanuary 26, 20191
My favorite room
I decided to improve my English skills. That is why I will post three of four times per week short stories about me and my properties .
Today I'd like to describe my favorite room in my flat.
I am working for <font style="background-color: yellow;">an international </font>pharmaceutical company and I live in my own flat with my family. Our flat consist of three rooms on the eleven<font style="background-color: yellow;">th</font> floor of <font style="background-color: yellow;">a </font>new twentyfloo<font style="background-color: yellow;">r</font> skyscraper.
My favorite room in our flat is my study. It hasn't changed from<font style="background-color: yellow;"> the</font> time when we moved <font style="background-color: yellow;">in</font>to this flat. It is not big, but <font style="background-color: yellow;">is a </font>cozy room. It isn't spacious but<font style="background-color: yellow;"> is a</font> very suitable room. There is big window in front of the door. Walls are covered<font style="background-color: yellow;"> in</font> brownish-white with subtle shade of ivory wallpaper. <font style="background-color: yellow;">The w</font>indow and <font style="background-color: yellow;">it's </font>frame are white and made from<font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font> plastic. There are light brown blinds<font style="background-color: yellow;"> at</font> the window. In the left corner near<font style="background-color: yellow;"> the</font> door there is a big sofa covered with <font style="background-color: yellow;">a </font>dark brown blanket. There are four big cushions on the sofa. <font style="background-color: yellow;">There is a s</font>mall colorful lamp hanging from the ceiling ma<font style="background-color: yellow;">de</font> from<font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font> plastic.When I switch on the lamp a soft warm light fills up all space of the room. In the right corner near the window is my desk <font style="background-color: yellow;">which is </font>made of brown wood. There are some shelves above the desk. My wife puts different books on these shelves. I keep my photo albums on the shelves. <font style="background-color: yellow;">A b</font>ig monitor sta<font style="background-color: yellow;">nds</font> on the desk and<font style="background-color: yellow;"> the</font> computer is hidden under the desk.There are a lot of plates from different countries on the wall opposite<font style="background-color: yellow;"> the</font> sofa. Above the sofa there are six prints f<font style="background-color: yellow;">ro</font>m six different capitals. I brought them<font style="background-color: yellow;"> in</font> capitals where I've been.
Bu<font style="background-color: yellow;">r</font>nt, colorful wool carpet lay<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font> on the floor. It makes <font style="background-color: yellow;">the </font>room more comfortable.
I feel<font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font> very comfortable and qui<font style="background-color: yellow;">et</font> in this room. I can concentrate and work without noise in this room.
That is why I love <font style="background-color: yellow;">this </font>one more than other <font style="background-color: yellow;">any other </font>room<font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font><font style="background-color: yellow;">
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</font>0 votedJanuary 25, 20192- Correzione per favore Le persone sempre hanno vogliono viaggiare. Il desiderio di vedere posti diversi e incontrare nuove persone sembra appartenere alla nature umana. Comunque quando troppo persone decidono di trovare lo stesso posto all stesso tempo questa desiderio viaggiare per creara problem ambientali. Alcune destinazioni popolari hanno gia dovuto limitare visitatori e altri posti lo stanno prendendo in considerazione. Preferiremmo tutti potere viaggiare senza restrizioni ma se vogliamo che questi luoghi sopravvivere per la prossima generazione, qualcosa deve essere fatto.January 25, 201920
