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My favorite room I decided to improve my English skills. That is why I will post three of four times per week short stories about me and my properties . Today I'd like to describe my favorite room in my flat. I am working for pharmaceutical international company and I live in my own flat with my family. Our flat consist of three rooms on the eleven floor of new twentyfloos skyscraper. My favorite room in our flat is my study. It hasn't changed from time when we moved to this flat. It is not big, but cozy room. It isn't spacious but very suitable room. There is big window in front of the door. Walls are covered by brownish-white with subtle shade of ivory wallpaper. Window and frame of window are white and made from the plastic. There are light brown blinds on the window. In the left corner nearby door there is a big sofa covered with dark brown blanket. There are four big cushions on the sofa. Small colorful lamp hanging from the ceiling makes from the plastic.When I switch on the lamp a soft warm light fills up all space of the room. In the right corner near the window is my desk made of brown wood. There are some shelves above the desk. My wife puts different books on these shelves. I keep my photo albums on the shelves. Big monitor states on the desk and computer is hidden under the desk. There are a lot of plates from different countries on the wall opposite sofa. Above the sofa there are six prints form six different capitals. I brought them from capitals where I've been. Bunt, colorful wool carpet lay on the floor. It makes room more comfortable. I feel myself very comfortable and quite in this room. I can concentrate and work without noise in this room. That is why I love one more than other rooms

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My favorite room

I decided to improve my English skills. That is why I will post three of four times per week short stories about me and my properties .
Today I'd like to describe my favorite room in my flat.
I am working for an international pharmaceutical company and I live in my own flat with my family. Our flat consist of three rooms on the eleventh floor of  a new twentyfloor skyscraper.
My favorite room in our flat is my study. It hasn't changed from the time when we moved into this flat. It is not big, but is a cozy room. It isn't spacious but is a very suitable room. There is big window in front of the door. Walls are covered in brownish-white with subtle shade of ivory wallpaper. The window and it's frame are white and made from  plastic. There are light brown blinds at the window. In the left corner near the door there is a big sofa covered with a dark brown blanket. There are four big cushions on the sofa. There is a small colorful lamp hanging from the ceiling made from  plastic.When I switch on the lamp a soft warm light fills up all space of the room. In the right corner near the window is my desk which is made of brown wood. There are some shelves above the desk. My wife puts different books on these shelves. I keep my photo albums on the shelves. A big monitor stands on the desk and the computer is hidden under the desk.

There are a lot of plates from different countries on the wall opposite the sofa. Above the sofa there are six prints from six different capitals. I brought them in capitals where I've been.
Burnt, colorful wool carpet lays on the floor. It makes the room more comfortable.
I feel  very comfortable and quiet in this room. I can concentrate and work without noise in this room.
That is why I love this one more than other any other room 


Your errors are minor, the meaning comes across, perhaps revisiting the use of articles would be useful?  Good attempt











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