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my life
Hi! my name is Rafaelle, I'm Brazilian.
I'm 22 and I'm trying learn English.
I'm a policewoman / police officer
I like travel, books, sports and I love my family !-----------
Very good!
Remember to place a capital letter with languages (eg: English. not: english)
Saying "I'm police" doesn't make much sense. I've highlighted two choices of words you could use in blue for you. Either one of those will fit OK thereKeep trying!
0 votedFebruary 9, 20171Prejudice about a red coat
I am a kind of judgmental, and have prejudices against lots of things.
I noticed someone who wears a red coat is self-confident or sometimes overconfident and boastful.
Red is an intense color and coats were made from a lot of cloth, so I think someone in a red coat wants to stand out or doesn't care.
From my experience, they are central figures and talk about themselves so much, like the world revolves around them.
I know that to have prejudices is not good but nobody exists without prejudices.
In my opinion, the important thing is to accept a new aspect of people which you didn't know.
I enjoy finding unexpected disposition of in someone after getting along with them.----------
Great attempt!
The red marked line doesn't flow well, so I would consider saying something like "Red is an intense colour, and the coat was large" or "The coat was large and an intense red colour".
I do agree with you that it is interesting to find an unexpected disposition within someone after knowing them for a long time!0 votedFebruary 8, 20171Change my life
I would like to improve my English to go to another country and have a better life.
We all know how important is to learn English and maybe other languages. I'm trying to learn Russian, Italian, Spanish and Korean by myself on the internet.
I've never studied in a language school to learn something, like I'm doing on the internet (just love the internet by the way, because it open us up a gate) so I am here to really learn and nothing but learn.I am married and a mother too so, I get things straightly seriously.
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Good job!
Remember to put a capital letter on languages (eg: English, French, Japanese)
Use commas " , " to indicate a quick rest in the sentence, where you would take a breath to continue talking.English is a hard language, and full of rules that contradict themselves. Keep going!
0 votedFebruary 8, 20171- 1. I mostly agree it's more important to be happy in my job than earning a large salary. <OK, but I would use a comma between "my job, than earning a large salary"> 2. It's easy to be addicted to the Internet for children. 3. A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily.0 votedFebruary 8, 20171
Be into ~~
I want to be a good speaker.
So I am studying English and
Please be my friend !
I am interested in art. I am into Salvador Dali.
His a piece of work is very coooool.
And I am into "The Beatls" "The Beatles" lately.
You are welcome. You can also say "You're welcome", which is the shorter version of "You are welcome". It is more common to say "you're welcome!0 votedOctober 9, 20161Mother ....
I'm living far away from my family. My mother came here last day yesterday. She suffers from backache too much a lot but I think she really forgot this ache whenever she spotted sees me. She stayed couple days with me and all the time she smiled. Today she left me, to go to her house, and was crying significantly a lot / constantly / non-stop I will never forget her teardrops. I put my head on the block for her ...Please choose the word in the green line that suits best.
I'm not quite sure what you mean by " I put my head on the block for her ...",0 votedSeptember 21, 20160The film
Hi, I would like to say that I needed to have some ideas to write some phrases this afternoon.
As I was watching a movie then I though to myself, why not to use this film and take some parts of it, to have the article that I intend to write.
So, the movie is about two little girls that disappeared in from of their houses while they their parents were drinking and having fun.
Of course , the police was were called and the plot developed behind this event. Shooting, drugs, and other things occurred during the scenes.
At the end, they found the girls and the bad guys got were arrested.
But unfortunately, the father of one of them suffered the consequences of not following the police orders and ended up dead.
Thanks for the corrections.0 votedSeptember 21, 20161
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