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Prejudice about a red coat I am a kind of judgmental, and have prejudices against lots of things. I noticed someone who wear a red coat is self-confident or sometimes overconfident and boastful. Red is an intense color and coats were made of big cloth, so I think someone in a red coat wants to stand out or doesn't care. From my experience, they are central figures and talk about themselves so much, like the world revolves around them. I know that to have prejudices is not good but nobody exist without prejudices. In my opinion, the important thing is to accept a new aspect of people which you didn't know. I enjoy finding unexpected disposition of someone after getting along with.

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Prejudice about a red coat

I am a kind of judgmental, and have prejudices against lots of things.
I noticed someone who wears a red coat is self-confident or sometimes overconfident and boastful.
Red is an intense color and coats were made from a lot of cloth, so I think someone in a red coat wants to stand out or doesn't care.
From my experience, they are central figures and talk about themselves so much, like the world revolves around them.

I know that to have prejudices is not good but nobody exists without prejudices.
In my opinion, the important thing is to accept a new aspect of people which you didn't know.
I enjoy finding unexpected disposition of in someone after getting along with them.


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Great attempt!

The red marked line doesn't flow well, so I would consider saying something like "Red is an intense colour, and the coat was large" or "The coat was large and an intense red colour".

I do agree with you that it is interesting to find an unexpected disposition within someone after knowing them for a long time!

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I'll use egoist next time if I have a chance. Thank you!
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People having such a personality is called egoist or egotist. I present my corrections here. The corrections own partly to one of my language partner. Here is it and I hope it's helpful to you. ------------------------------------------------------------- Prejudice against red coats I am full of prejudices against lots of things. For example, I noticed that the people who like wearing a red coat are likely egoistic, proud, over-confident, and even boastful. Red color is intense, bright and red coats were made of big cloth. So I tend to believe that those in a red coat desire to be standing-out or don't care about anything at all. According to my experiences, these people are self-centric and talk about themselves much, like the whole world revolves around them. I know that it is not good to have prejudices, though nobody exists without prejudices. In my opinion, the important thing is to be open to people who you don't know much about. I enjoy finding the shining virtues of those who I have to get along with for some time.

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