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    Farm animals

    Hello everyone, today I will write about <s>the</s> farm animals. <s>The</s> Farm animals <s>is</s> are the kind of animals that live <s>in</s> on the farm. <s>The</s> Farm animals <s>is</s> are different with animals that live in the forest. <s>The</s> Farm animals <s>has</s> include fish, rabbits, goats, sheep, buffalos, <s>houses</s> horses, donkeys, mules, pigs, chickens, turkeys, duck, geese and cows. <s>That is</s> These are the farm animals. <s>It</s> They help<s>s</s> people live better. I can <s>has</s> give many examples <s>for</s> of farm animals helping people. The sheep helps the people <s>has soft feathers and it so</s> with it's warm wool. Next, <s>is</s> the fish, pigs, rabbits and buffalo <s>is</s> help people <s>has meal to it</s> by being food and when we sell <s>it</s> them, we <s>have many</s> get a lot of money. The cows help me <s>has</s> have fresh milk to drink. The chicken and geese help me <s>has</s> have many eggs. <s>It</s> What has many animals and <s>it</s> helps the people too? It is the farm animals. Thank you very much for read my post. Goodbye and good night everyone.

    Great job!
    Some notes:
    is -> used for singular terms or large concepts
    - a list should be either all plural or all singular
    - 'these' and 'they' refer to plural subject from before (ie. farm animalS)
    Good job on plural animals that do not end with -s! (fish, sheep, geese)
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    April 23, 2020
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    Hi Cindy,
    Wish you all the best on your Master's Degree!!
    I am practicing Vietnamese reading and writing right now, and I'd be more than happy to correct eachother's notebooks (: I am not yet ready for speaking and listening but, if you'd like, I'll definitely let you know when I am!
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    April 23, 2020
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    A short day

    Hi everybody,
    You know, this <s>time</s> is a very crazy time in the world due to Covid-19. <s>Therefore,</s> Almost all people who stay home have nothing to do and that makes their day so long. By contrast, my day is too short <s>everyday</s>. I have to wake up early in the morning to wash my face, brush my teeth, have breakfast bla bla.. and then go to work. It is late after work <s>is late of the day and</s> but I still have many things to do. I don’t even have much time to study english. <s>Otherwises</s> Anyways, I hope you guys stay safe and health<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">l</s>y <s>on</s> during this time. <s>A quick day!!!</s>


    Great work! :)
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    April 23, 2020
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    Egg coffee sounds delicious! I must try it the next time I visit Vietnam!!
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    April 23, 2020
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    April 23, 2020
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    Viết cho hai ngày! Hôm qua tôi ăn mì gói và kim chi cùa Hàn Quốc. Hôm qua tôi không có đũa thì phải dụng nĩa! Dụng nĩa ăn mì rất kỳ. Hôm nay tôi xem phim "Frozen 2" và có ngựa ở trong phim. Tôi rất thích con ngựa.
    April 23, 2020
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    Please help me check this paragraph

    Motivation is the feeling that you get when you are willing to do something, such as to start learning a foreign language. I usually find motivation in the things that I can achieve when I take action (awk). For example: If I speak English fluently, I can communicate with foreigners as well as know more about the outside world. I also read the stories of successful learners and watch <s>their</s> videos <s>shared</s> about their experiences. Sometimes<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">,</s> I apply the methods that are suitable for me. Those are very useful. <s>Besides</s> I<s>’d</s> like to talk with <s>others person</s> people who older and wiser than me. I learn a lot from them, not only how to learn effectively but also how to handle the problems in life. However, maintaining motivation is hard. There are days when I’m tired and don’t want to do anything, but I remind myself to keep <s>go</s> on going. I tried a lot (worked hard) so I don’t want my effort <s>is</s> to be wasted.
    Please help me check this paragraph and correct it if i'm wrong. Thank you so much.

    Geat job!! I couldn't minimally edit the awk sentence and I didn't fully understand it. Maybe I'd change it to something like, "When I take action, I am acting on my motivations." Or "My motivation gives me power to take actions"? Or "My goals/dreams/fantasies give me power to take action."
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    April 21, 2020
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    April 21, 2020
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    pearl birds

    We have a new pair of pearl birds . One is white and <s>another</s> the other is grey. They sleep together in the nest we made. They are <s>very strange</s> in a new home, so they are very careful.
    After one<s>r</s> or two days, the pearl birds are very hungry. They can eat grains and drink water.
    After a week, they can jump around and sing songs in the cage.
    After one month, they can play and fly from one side to <s>another</s> the other in the cage.

    Nice job! "They are very strange" made me think there was something wrong with the birds instead of them being shy and confused. I am assuming they are very careful (or shy) because you just brought them home and into a new environment!
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    April 21, 2020
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    Sổ tay biết ơn: Hôm nay tôi biết ơn tại vì tôi đươc nói chuyện với mấy bạn lâu ngày mới gặp lại. Hằng ngày chúng ta phải nhớ biết ơn. Đừng quên, nhắ? Biết ơn rất quan trọng cho hạnh phúc.
    April 21, 2020
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