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Motivation is feeling that you are willing to do something, such as to start learning foreign language. I usually find motivation in the things that I can achieve when I take action. For example: If I speak English fluently, I can communicate with foreigners as well as know more about the outside world. I also read the stories of successful learners and watch their videos shared about experiences. Sometimes, I apply the methods that are suitable for me. Those are very useful. Besides, I’d like to talk with others person who older and wiser than me. I learn a lot from them, not only how to learn effectively but also how to handle the problem in life. However, maintaining motivation is hard. There are days when I’m tired and don’t want to do anything, but I remind myself to keep go on. I tried a lot so I don’t want my effort is wasted.
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Please help me check this paragraph
Motivation is the feeling that you get when you are willing to do something, such as to start learning a foreign language. I usually find motivation in the things that I can achieve when I take action (awk). For example: If I speak English fluently, I can communicate with foreigners as well as know more about the outside world. I also read the stories of successful learners and watch their videos shared about their experiences. Sometimes, I apply the methods that are suitable for me. Those are very useful. Besides I’d like to talk with others person people who older and wiser than me. I learn a lot from them, not only how to learn effectively but also how to handle the problems in life. However, maintaining motivation is hard. There are days when I’m tired and don’t want to do anything, but I remind myself to keep go on going. I tried a lot (worked hard) so I don’t want my effort is to be wasted.
Please help me check this paragraph and correct it if i'm wrong. Thank you so much.
Geat job!! I couldn't minimally edit the awk sentence and I didn't fully understand it. Maybe I'd change it to something like, "When I take action, I am acting on my motivations." Or "My motivation gives me power to take actions"? Or "My goals/dreams/fantasies give me power to take action."
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Shirleen Oktaviani Thanks for helping me!
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Hi, your writing is great, but I do have some suggestion as down below :)
Motivation is a feeling when you are eager to do something, such as to learn a new language. I usually find my motivation on something that I can achieve with my action. For examples, If I can speak English fluently, I would be able to talk with foreigners and know more about the outside world. I also read stories from successful learners and watch their experiences videos. Sometimes, I practice their methods which suitable for me. Those are very useful. Furthermore, I'm like to talk with other people who are older and wiser than me. I will learn a lot from them, not only how to learn effectively but also how to face problems in life. However, to maintain motivation is hard. There are days when I feel tired and don't want to do anything, but I keep reminding myself to keep going on. I've been trying so many things, so I don't want my efforts to be wasted.
You're getting there, keep learning!! :)
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