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    好久没改日记了,要不加你微信?好奇你能留做什么评论. Maybe it's one of the messages that your friend leave? I don't think it's a joke or mockery, maybe it's a greeting or asking for opinions? 好久没改日记了:He or She or you haven't updated the diary in a long time.(like greeting words, or just state a fact) 要不加你微信?:Can I add your Wechat?(maybe he wants to contact you for further conmunication, also make friend with you ) 好奇你能留做什么评论.:I’m curious that what will you write in comment. (waiting for your comments, maybe your words is interesting to him?)
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    August 22, 2016
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    这个周末。

    生个月(上个月)

    我的好朋友买了机票,因为他的组喜欢的音乐对准备一个音乐会在我的城市。(因为他喜欢的音乐组合准备在我的城市开一个音乐会。)


    这个周末,他和有些朋友来了芝加哥玩儿(他和一些朋友来芝加哥玩)。

    我带他们去饭店,吃芝加哥风味的饭菜,比如比萨饼,牛肉三明治等。

    他们回家以后,我的城市这个周末还参加一个航展( 这个周末,我还参加了我们城市举办的一个航展)。

    我在湖边一边跑步一边看很快的飞机(一边看快速飞翔的飞机?)。

    我跑的(了)六英里左右,我很喜欢看那个航展。

    我今天晚上(we usually say :今天晚上我……)帮助(help?what do you mean?)我的女朋友(do what?),然后我们去饭店吃沙拉,汉堡包等。

    以上仅仅是个人建议,希望共同进步!^-^

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    August 22, 2016
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