please help me correct any mistakes in this simple rusume,and modify it. thanks..
Hello.. my name is Liuming,and i 'm a active girl . I'm a college student in Nanchang institute of technolegy and business English major in first year.Also, i've passed the CET-4. Besides, as for my own characters, i'm very patient and enthusiasm .i really hope you can give me a chance to enrich my life and experience lots of things that i've never done.so, it would be very appreciate that if u could give me a part-time job, thanks for reading.. ^_^