please help me correct any mistakes in this simple rusume,and modify it. thanks..
Hello.. my name is Liuming,and i 'm a active girl . I'm a college student in Nanchang institute of technolegy and business English major in first year.Also, i've passed the CET-4. Besides, as for my own characters, i'm very patient and enthusiasm .i really hope you can give me a chance to enrich my life and experience lots of things that i've never done.so, it would be very appreciate that if u could give me a part-time job, thanks for reading.. ^_^
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Hello...My Name is Liuming.
I'm a college student in Nanchang institute of Technology and Business.
My first year major was English, and I have passed the CET-4 as well.
Regarding my skills, I am very active, patient, and enthusiastic.
I hope you would give me the chance to enrich the experiences of my life.
It would be very appreciated if you could give me a part-time job, thanks for reading.
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Dear Liuming,
I tried to review and modify your resume as much as i can for now, but if you were seeking for a job, i think you need to make it more formal.
I'll be glad to help you any time, but may need more details.
You can search Google for "Cover letters" that may help be even more.
Good Luck and nice to meet you.
Bye
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Hello, my name is Liuming, and I'm an energetic girl. I'm a college student at Nanchang Institute of Technology and Business. I am an English major in my first year. Also, I've passed the CET-4. As for my character, I'm very patient and enthusiastic. I really hope you can give me the chance to enrich my life and experience things that I've never done. I would really appreciate it if you could give me a part-time job. Thank you.
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