correction = yellow another suggestion = green

About Meetup

The other day, I tried going to a meet up event, where you can do language exhange. (Or "I tried going to a language exchange meet up")
I found it on a website called Meetup. I heard some of those events are not so good, but the one I went to was actually good.
After that, some of the people invited me to join a the church stuff they usually do, which is like where some people sing in a band, pick up some quotes from the Bible, pray for them and so on. To be honest, I'm not a very (or) so much of a religious person, so I didn't really want to join, but people there were really nice and welcoming, so I really enjoyed it.
Thank you for reading.

yellow = correction. Blue = okay but not necessary suggestion = green

My Diary ♡ July 3 I cooked vegetable soup ★ Thank you for correctting correcting my English

Today is Monday, the first day of the The day of starting this week.
This morning I went to a supermarket near my house and bought some vegetables: onion, mushroom, cabbage, carrot, radish and tomato! So I want to cook vegetable soup for my diet. Actually, I've gained weights these days :(

I'll show you my soup.

Then I was watching "FRIENDS" on the Netflix while eating this soup.
The taste was good and "FRIENDS" is also good! (I'm into "FRIENDS" now. It's really funny!)
You could try: "Then I watched Friends on Netflix while eating the soup. The taste was good and Friends was good too!"

Then I practiced English for about 2 hour and a half hours with online teachers.
It was difficult for me how to pronunce pronounce "vegetable." My teacher told me that I should pronunce it veget"e"ble, but I pronunced it veget"a"ble many times.

I should practice English even harder! So I'll review today's lessons after finishing to write this dialy. 

My family

Hello , how are you?
Today I will write a little bit about my family ^^
My family is small. There are only 6 of us.
I am the biggest sister. I was born first, so I am the leader in the house :D
I have one sister and her name is Safi. I love her so much. She loves learning languages too and she has really big dreams. I hope she will achieve them one day. I also have 2 brothers and their names are Mohammed and Mahmoud.
Mohammed graduated this year from high school and he will travel to study. I love him so much but he is a really crazy guy and he makes a lot of noise in the house so when he is out of the house it becomes so quite :P
My last brother is still in primary school and he likes to play with his friends a lot. 
And the King and Queen of the house are my mom and dad. They are full of kindness and try to give us everything we need. I love mom and dad so much! 
I love my family. God bless my family ^^

To offer another world view: I've never heard tig used in Australia, only tag. It must be a British thing.