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My Diary ♡ July 3 I cooked vegetable soup ★ Thank you for correctting my English Today is Monday. The day of starting this week. This morning I went to a supermarket near my house and bought some vegetables;onion,mushroom,cabbage,carrot,radish and tomato! So I want to cook vegetable soup for my diet. Actually I gained weights thesedays :( I'll show you my soup. Then I was watching "FRIENDS" on the Netflix while eating this soup. The taste was good and "FRIENDS" is also good! (I'm into "FRIENDS" now. It's really funny!) Then I practice English for about 2 hour and a half with online teachers. It was difficult for me how to pronunce "vegetable." My teacher told me that I should pronunce it veget"e"ble, but I pronunced it veget"a"ble many times. I should practice English even harder! So I'll review today's lessons after finishing to write this dialy.

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yellow = correction. Blue = okay but not necessary suggestion = green

My Diary ♡ July 3 I cooked vegetable soup ★ Thank you for correctting correcting my English

Today is Monday, the first day of the The day of starting this week.
This morning I went to a supermarket near my house and bought some vegetables: onion, mushroom, cabbage, carrot, radish and tomato! So I want to cook vegetable soup for my diet. Actually, I've gained weights these days :(

I'll show you my soup.

Then I was watching "FRIENDS" on the Netflix while eating this soup.
The taste was good and "FRIENDS" is also good! (I'm into "FRIENDS" now. It's really funny!)
You could try: "Then I watched Friends on Netflix while eating the soup. The taste was good and Friends was good too!"


Then I practiced English for about 2 hour and a half hours with online teachers.
It was difficult for me how to pronunce pronounce "vegetable." My teacher told me that I should pronunce it veget"e"ble, but I pronunced it veget"a"ble many times.

I should practice English even harder! So I'll review today's lessons after finishing to write this dialy. 

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