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- species extinction As human beings are gradually aware of the relationship between our growing population and the environmental problems like global warming,melting glaciers and the like,few of us noticed the growing population also have enormous influence on the wildlife.As the line graph demonstrates above,in us,with the population increase the amount of extinct species soar as well. More people needs more place to live in ,we have to translate more nature space into human’s colony.Consequently ,the wildlife have to forsake their homelands for a more save habit .Deforestation and the desire of animals’ fur also play an important role.Deforestation pushes the process of destroying the wildlife’s habitat,capturing animals for fur accelerates the rate of species extinction.With all this major elements work together, a host of species will never meet us. To save the remaining species from wrong hands,we must prevent illegal transaction of animals and build more nature preserve.Meanwhile we need to advertise the importance of protecting the wildlife to earn more support.Only in this way can we have a more colorful beautiful and vigorous earth. Please tell me my grammar error and where I need to improve.Thank you so much!September 23, 201700
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我早上七点起的床。我睡觉八小时。there should have one more verb 我睡觉 “睡”八个小时 or you can just use 睡 and delete 觉 just like 我(I) 睡 (sleep)八个小时
后来十点我要下去健身房然后跑三十分钟。delete 后来 要下去 is wrong it should be 要去(going)
我今晚要去我的女朋友的家。他 “他”means he you should use she which is 她 in Chinese 的妈妈今晚做饭德国式饭。德国式饭 is a noun you don' t need “饭” you should delete it so it' s correct to say她的妈妈今晚做德国式饭 我觉得在那里三小时然后十点走了。觉得means “think” ifyou mean you stay there for 3 hours you should delete 觉得 and add 待了after 在那里 , 我在那里待了三小时0 votedAugust 14, 20160很简单的选择
一个男人给女朋友打个电话告诉她: "我想根你谈一谈"。it's跟not根,根means root in Chinese 她感觉一点着急但是她去男朋友的家。I don't know what do you mean if you mean the girl feels very anxious it's 很着急not 一点着急but if you mean she feels little anxious I think you'd better change感觉to 有...on the basis of this sentence it's wrong to use 但是。 但是just like "but"in English in this sentence you should use 所以which means "so"in English .
他说 "我想问你一个重要的问题: 我给你这三朵玫瑰花 。第一朵的意思是幸福,第二朵是爱情,第三是信任。你喜欢什么玫瑰?"I think the final sentence is wrong .the boy show her three flowers so she should choose among this three flowers but 什么 should use to ask the character I think it's better change to 哪支
她选择了第三朵玫瑰花 然后告诉他"信任从来结束"I don't know what. do信任从来结束 mean but I can tell you it's totally a wrong sentence
最终他们结婚了。great article!keep going!my English is not well but I try my best to express what i mean.0 votedAugust 13, 20161Are these sentence correct?
1- 张文在哪里工作?
2- 张文工作很忙吗?
3-每天工作多少小时?we usually say 几个 小时 not多少小时
4- 有时候一个星期要工作几天? I don't know what do you mean but I think it's better to use 通常not有时候5-今天下班以前经理告诉他什么?
6- 张文可以休息几个星期?
7- 张文准备去哪里旅行?
8- 坐飞机去西安要多少小时? we usually use几个小时 not 多少小时
9- 坐火车去西安要多少小时去西安? the same advice
10- 张文想坐什么去?
11- 回家以后还有几天?i
12- I don' t know what do you mean.if you mean how many days left after you came home I think it's correct but it's a little strange but if you mean how many days to go home I think it's还有几天回家
13-如果你到中国朋友家去做客,应该怎么称呼朋友的家人?
14- 到朋友家去做客,要不要带礼物?
15- 应该带什么礼物去?0 votedAugust 13, 20161

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