a bad week for me I feel so bad because my phone screen was broken. I don't know how to deal with it. It is because my phone is Huawei which is a Chinese phone company, and there is no Huawei local office in the USA. It is not easy to fix it. Then, I have to use my old phone to instead. the worst thing is that my old phone has a sound problem which I can't hear what they are saying while I am talking on the phone. Maybe I need to buy a new phone, so another problem is coming that I don't have extra money to buy a new phone. Another problem for me is driving. I feel it is not easy to drive and I feel nervous even though I passed the road test. My hands sweat when my hands touch the wheel. However, I have to drive a car to the USPS local office to ship my package which my old textbook sold on Amazon and I had to ship it to my buyer. I feel a little bit urgent because there are not always buyers to buy textbooks in the third party on Amazon. Most of them choose from the online bookstores which have high comments rating. On the contrary, I am just a new seller who doesn't have any comments from buyers. Even for me, I like to buy books from any online bookstores. I wish I have a good luck tomorrow. thanks for your attention and correction

my first year school life I have not been written any sentences on this website for a long time since I got back to school. I have been working on my study to improve my English. today I have finished all my ESL classes and will take the actual college class. I can feel my English is getting better, and I like to stay on campus to learn new things and meet new friends. Learning helps me enrich my knowledge and get skills that I am able to understand well while people are talking to me and be able to speak with friends in English. I am I got into school after I took a placement test since last summer. The school has put me into ESL class because I have very poor writing skills. I have learned how to write essays on the writing class. they have taught me how to write an introduction with a thesis statement, and how to develop the supporting ideas. meanwhile, teachers also help me correct my grammars. Right now I feel I didn't learn anything when I was in China even though I had learned English in high school for 3 years. I have realized that if you learn a new language without using it, you can't learn anything. if there is no chance to speak after we have learned a new language, the language will become useless for you, and you wasted your time. we can get some advice by friends whom we make at school. However, people who study in the community school seem very busy, this is because most of them have to work and study. Some of them have full-time jobs or part-time jobs. On the other hand, the school tuition is so high, and the textbooks are expensive too, especially for foreign students.

please correct my sentence I have read two chapters of Harry Potter. these two chapters are called "the boy who lived" and "the vanishing glass". For the first chapter was talking about Dursley's family who is Harry aunt's family. especially his uncle, he worked in drills company. when he went to work, he saw a lobby cat acted like a human. then he saw owls were flying in the sky at daytime. that is very weird that we can't see an owl at night. He also saw some people were gathering on the street with cloaks. He heard people were talking about Potter. But he didn't tell his wife about this kind of weird things after he went home. At night the cat sat on the wall and talk about something with another weird person. For the second chapter was talking about Harry went to a zoo with Dursleys family and another family of aunts friends. he had lived with Dursleys ten miserable years, He had lived in the cupboard. his aunt asked him to do housework and his cousin always punch him in the face.he doesn't have equal rights in the family.On cousin's birthday he always was sent to an old lady's house, but this time he had chance to go out with them. they were watching snacks and discovered his genus that he can talk with animals.

Do you prefer to live in a city or small town help me with correction I grew up in a small town, maybe there was counted a countryside, and moved to a city.I think i would like to live in the city.I can't imagine if I go back to live in a small town after I lived in a city. Towns and cities both have problems of transportation. It depends on what lifestyle you want.we should have a car if we live in a town.This is convenient to drive anywhere you want and always has parking lots.We can't go anywhere without a car.there are not many public transportation.but it is expensive to own a car and pay gas or something.However, we have many choices of transportation in the city, such as bus, subway, taxi.Taking one of them is cheaper than driving.but there are many traffic and expensive parking in the city, so public transportation become our best choice. In the city,there are many different restaurants, the theaters,museums,parks and clubs where can spend time with, many activities and events can attend especially we can make friends there.The light is always on on the street at night.i think this is better to live in the city than live in the town. Like the USA, it is combined with different races of people, varieties culture, and religions. We usually hear the different language when we walking on the street.Anyway, I prefer living in the city rather than a town.What is your choice?

Eating out or eating at home. please help me to correct them Some people like to eat out at reastuants or fast food stands,while others prefer to eat at home.It depend on their lifestyle. Some people have very busy jobs and don't have time to cook. They like the convinience of eating out.Overall, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home. The cost is rising up when we are eating out,especially with friends.I can buy lots of vegetables in market with the same amount of money that I cost.for example, if I spent seven or eight dollars for my lunch at fast food,it is enough to feed two more people at home. Eating at home is better for us.it is wasted for me to eating at restaurants,they serve much food over what I need at one meal, and most of time I need to pack the rest up and bring home.If We eat at home,we can cook what we want such as ingredients and flavors, and control how much food we need. It is convenient for us to eat out at fast food stands, it saves out time, we don't need shopping, cooking and cleaning up.But there are many simple food that we don't need to take long time to make.If we eat out, we need to drive, park, and wait the table and service, then drive back.I prefer cooking and eating at home because of the health issue. Everyone need to make choices for their lifestyle.

Family What is family? A old says,family meant the people that you related to, who shared a bloodline and a common history and a common ancestor. Family is a unit living together,it contains mother, father and children.But I think family is a group of people who connect with love and understanding. Doesn't have to be related by blood. This is a family who makes you smile and give you a support no matter what you do.Even for pets that we adopt and feed them, They also are counted to my family. We play together ,sharing love and happiness.

Global climate, would like someone to correct. Global climate change is real and the problem need to be addressed immediately.such as global warming, that included melting polar ice,rising sea levels,the lands will be flooded. We humans need to take some measures to teat these natural phenomena.First, Government needs control the amount of pollution from factories and industries, also the vehicles exhaust emission.Secondly,we need to protect plants and trees from cutting down,I think we also need to plant more trees.thirdly, we can use more widely clean energy such as solar and wind energy.fourth, we people need to strethen awareness of environmental protection, I think there are more methods can be use.I just know about these.I would like more people can think about it. And give more advice.