Eating out or eating at home. please help me to correct them
Some people like to eat out at reastuants or fast food stands,while others prefer to eat at home.It depend on their lifestyle. Some people have very busy jobs and don't have time to cook. They like the convinience of eating out.Overall, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.
The cost is rising up when we are eating out,especially with friends.I can buy lots of vegetables in market with the same amount of money that I cost.for example, if I spent seven or eight dollars for my lunch at fast food,it is enough to feed two more people at home.
Eating at home is better for us.it is wasted for me to eating at restaurants,they serve much food over what I need at one meal, and most of time I need to pack the rest up and bring home.If We eat at home,we can cook what we want such as ingredients and flavors, and control how much food we need.
It is convenient for us to eat out at fast food stands, it saves out time, we don't need shopping, cooking and cleaning up.But there are many simple food that we don't need to take long time to make.If we eat out, we need to drive, park, and wait the table and service, then drive back.I prefer cooking and eating at home because of the health issue. Everyone need to make choices for their lifestyle.
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Some people like to eat out at restaurants or fast food stands, while others prefer to eat at home. It depends on their lifestyle. Some people have very busy jobs and don't have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.
Eating at home is better(healthier) for us. It is a waste for me to eating at a restaurants; they serve much more food over than what I need at one meal, and most of time I need to pack the rest up and bring it home. If we eat at home, we can cook what we want such as with any ingredients and flavors we want and control how much food we need.
It is convenient for us to eat out at fast food stands, it saves out time, we don't need to shopping, cooking and cleaning up. But there are many simple foods that we don't need to take a long time to make. If we eat out, we need to drive, park, and wait for the table and service, then drive back. I prefer cooking and eating at home because of the health issue. Everyone needs to make choices for their lifestyle.
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I really enjoyed reading your article; I think you make many logical points ~ I'm learning how to cook by myself because it's too expensive to eat out.
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Eating out or eating at home. please help me to correct them
Some people like to eat out at reastuants or fast food stands, while others prefer to eat at home. It depends on their lifestyle. Some people have very busy jobs and don't have time to cook. They like the convinience of eating out. Generally, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.The cost is more when we eat out, especially with friends. I can buy lots and lots of vegetables in the market for the same amount of money that one pizza in a restaurmt costs. Also, if I spent seven or eight dollars for my fast food lunch, it is enough to feed two or more people at home.
Eating at home is better for us. It is, for me, a waste to eat at restaurants. They overserve what I need for one meal, and most of the time I need to pack the rest up and bring it home. If we eat at home, we can cook what we want adding our own ingredients and flavors, and controlling how much food we need.
It is convenient for us to eat out at fast food stands, it saves our time, we don't need to shop, cook and to clean up. And there are many simple foods that do not need a long time to make. If we eat out, we need to drive, park, and wait for the table and service, then drive back. I prefer cooking and eating at home because it is healthier. Everyone need to make choices for their lifestyle.
Very well written!
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Eating out or eating at home. please help me to correct them
Some people like to eat out at reastuants or fast food stands,while others prefer to eat at home.It depends on their lifestyle. Some people have very busy jobs and don't have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out.Overall, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.The cost is rising up when we are eating out, especially with friends. I can buy lots of vegetables in the market with the same amount of money that it costs. for example, if I spent seven or eight dollars for my lunch at a fast food stand ,it is enough to feed two more people at home.
Eating at home is better for us. It is a wasted of money to always eat at restaurants, they serve more food than what I need for one meal, and most of time I need to pack the rest up and bring it home. If We eat at home,we can cook what we want using our own ingredients and flavours, and control how much food we need.
However It is convenient for us to eat out at fast food stands, it saves our time, we don't need shopping, cooking and cleaning up.But there is a lot of simple food that we don't need to take a long time to make.If we eat out, we need to drive, park, and wait at the table for service, then drive back. I prefer cooking and eating at home because of the health issue. Everyone needs to make choices for their lifestyle.
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