Story about Galileo Galilei. Part 1. Please, correct it!

It was in 1633, on ninth April. In just some days, Galileo Galilei would be carried before the judgement of the inquisition. The town had been talking about their controversial statements. The village people thought that he was going to pay with death. The crime done for the scientist had been heresy.

At Minerva Square, which is found in Rome, two men played to the chess and a group of people around them watched to the players with a great interest for knowing the winner.

The players were Miguel and Filipo. The first one, was a merchant from other lands who know “the art of business”, while the second was a young man who was the son of dead duke. The relationship was commercial.

In the middle of the game, the controversial affair was discussed for the people around them.

Thank you so much for reading. I hope you had enjoyed the first part of my story, tomorrow I'll send the part two.

This is a photo is from Minerva square in Rome.

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