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Fishing mountain stream
I have been traveling for fishing today. There is a pay fishing mountain stream where it is 2 hours far by car from my house. I must bought one day pass of $30 (USD). I'm not sure it is expenxive. I caught 4 rainbow trouts. I was fishing for the first time in 10 years. But It was enjoyable fishing and felt relaxed with the nature.
See you.Another way to write this sentence could be Today, I travelled to go fishing. Or I went fishing today.
The next sentence can be read in such a way that it sounds like there is a literal mountain of fish. So maybe There is a mountain stream that allows fishing 2 hours from my house by car.
There bought is a past tense term or a future term, while must is usually used in present or future. So maybe instead it can be, I bought a day pass for $30 (USD) or even A day pass must be bought for $30 (USD).
I'm not sure if it is expensive.
I caught 4 rainbow trout (Good job trout are sometimes hard to catch, at least near where I live).
I was fishing for the first time in ten years. It was enjoyable and I felt relaxed in nature ( or you can say I felt relaxed with nature).
Mr. Tetsuya Ito, you keep switching from past tense to present tense that is really all. The general idea is very clear, so I don't really think it matters much. However, it will be good to watch out for.
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0 votedJuly 20, 20161My birthday
Today is my birthday. I always decide the goal of one year. < I go abroad alone.> So, I'll try hard to study English toward realization.Happy Birthday!!
Today is my birthday. I always decide to set a goal for the year. ( I will go abroad alone) or even (I want to go abroad alone). So, I'll try hard to study english to meet the goal. Or I'll study English hard towards that goal.
0 votedJuly 20, 20161Sentences Feb 27 2016
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If you throw away a trash, litter, or cigarettes on the street and you are found by police doing that, you will be punished and have to pay a fine.If you have a group of three items or more and comma goes between each item. On the last items, cigarette, you can put a (a) in front of cigarette to show one or add an s to make it plural. The sentence made a little more sense adding a s. Trash and litter are very similar, they can also mean the same thing. This is a really long run on sentence and may be better off with something like.
If you are found be police throwing trash, litter, or cigarettes on the street, you may have to pay a fine.
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I've heard there's a car which can run on electricity. We should shift current cars to electric cars considering the environment.This sentence is very good, I was just took out the natural. I was unsure if you meant to preserve nature, or to be considerate of the enviroment.
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Is it expensive to travel around Europe? I've heard if you use a cheap airline company, it doesn't cost you so much.Is it, if you leave it as is is, there is not really anything that is being asked. And you forgot the R on heard. It's spelt very similarly so happens a lot. :) On this one you can say it doesn't cost as much, or it doesn't cost so much either would work.
0 votedJuly 20, 20161
