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Fishing mountain stream I have been traveling for fishing today. There is a pay fishing mountain stream where it is 2 hours far by car from my house. I must bought one day pass of $30 (USD). I'm not sure it is expenxive. I caught 4 rainbow trouts. I was fishing for the first time in 10 years. But It was enjoyable fishing and felt relaxed with the nature. See you.

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Fishing mountain stream

I have been traveling for fishing today. There is a pay fishing mountain stream where it is 2 hours far by car from my house. I must bought one day pass of $30 (USD). I'm not sure it is expenxive. I caught 4 rainbow trouts. I was fishing for the first time in 10 years. But It was enjoyable fishing and felt relaxed with the nature.
See you.

Another way to write this sentence could be Today, I travelled to go fishing. Or I went fishing today. 

The next sentence can be read in such a way that it sounds like there is a literal mountain of fish. So maybe There is a mountain stream that allows fishing 2 hours from my house by car. 

There bought is a past tense term or a future term, while must is usually used in present or future. So maybe instead it can be, I bought a day pass for $30 (USD) or even A day pass must be bought for $30 (USD). 

I'm not sure if it is expensive. 

I caught 4 rainbow trout (Good job trout are sometimes hard to catch, at least near where I live). 

I was fishing for the first time in ten years. It was enjoyable and I felt relaxed in nature ( or you can say I felt relaxed with nature).

Mr. Tetsuya Ito, you keep switching from past tense to present tense that is really all. The general idea is very clear, so I don't really think it matters much. However, it will be good to watch out for. 


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Fishing Mountain Stream

I have been travelling for fishing today. There is a pay fishing mountain stream where it which is 2 hours far by car from my house. I must bought one a day pass of $30 (USD). I'm not sure if it is expensive. I caught 4 rainbow trouts. I was fishing for the first time in 10 years but it was enjoyable fishing and I felt relaxed with in the nature.
See you.

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日本語訳(自己レス): 今日、私は釣りにでかけました。家から車で2時間の所に有料の渓流釣り場があります。私は30ドルの1日券を購入しました。その値段が高いのか定かではありません。私は4匹のニジマスを釣りました。10年ぶりに釣りをしたのですが、釣りを楽しむことができ、自然に癒されました。

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