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Fishing mountain stream
I have been traveling for fishing today. There is a pay fishing mountain stream where it is 2 hours far by car from my house. I must bought one day pass of $30 (USD). I'm not sure it is expenxive. I caught 4 rainbow trouts. I was fishing for the first time in 10 years. But It was enjoyable fishing and felt relaxed with the nature.See you.
Another way to write this sentence could be Today, I travelled to go fishing. Or I went fishing today.
The next sentence can be read in such a way that it sounds like there is a literal mountain of fish. So maybe There is a mountain stream that allows fishing 2 hours from my house by car.
There bought is a past tense term or a future term, while must is usually used in present or future. So maybe instead it can be, I bought a day pass for $30 (USD) or even A day pass must be bought for $30 (USD).
I'm not sure if it is expensive.
I caught 4 rainbow trout (Good job trout are sometimes hard to catch, at least near where I live).
I was fishing for the first time in ten years. It was enjoyable and I felt relaxed in nature ( or you can say I felt relaxed with nature).
Mr. Tetsuya Ito, you keep switching from past tense to present tense that is really all. The general idea is very clear, so I don't really think it matters much. However, it will be good to watch out for.
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Thanks
Fishing Mountain Stream
I have been travelling for fishing today. There is a pay fishing mountain stream where it which is 2 hours far by car from my house. I must bought one a day pass of $30 (USD). I'm not sure if it is expensive. I caught 4 rainbow trouts. I was fishing for the first time in 10 years but it was enjoyable fishing and I felt relaxed with in the nature.
See you.
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