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    Day13

    This morning I ran for twenty minutes, and it made me so tired to half to death*, because I have not been gone running for 10 more days. I won't give up going on running.


    *You can say things like that scared me half to death but here made me so tired sounds best. 

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    February 2, 2017
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    Day14

    Today is the last day of Modern Family. I love these three families so much.They help each other serve solve the problems.* They are so funny, sweet and nice. I love the two children best in this American drama. Is One is named Alex and the other is named Like Luke; one is an eccentric, the other is clever.**

    *For this sentence you could also say: They help solve each other's problems.

    *Unsure if this is what you wanted to say, but it looked like you were giving their names, and then describing them.


    Well done! Only a few minor corrections! =^-^=

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    February 1, 2017
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    Hello! Do you want to learn Chinese? Would you like to be my friend?

    Hello!
    I am from China. I'm studying English and Japanese。
    If you want to learn Chinese，or even want to be my friend, I would be happy.
    So , shall we begin?


    In English, it sounds better to say "be my friend" than "make friends with me" in most instances. Similarly, it sounds better to say either "do you want to learn Chinese" OR "would you like to learn Chinese" than "would you want to learn Chinese"

    Great job! I'm just learning Chinese myself, so let me know if you'd ever like to chat!


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    July 19, 2016
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