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Hello!Would you want to learn Chinese?Would you like to be my fiends? Hello! I come from China,I'm studying English and Japanese。 If you want to learn Chinese,or even want to make fiend with me,I will be happy. So , shall we begin?

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Hello! Do you want to learn Chinese? Would you like to be my friend?

Hello!
I am from China. I'm studying English and Japanese。
If you want to learn Chinese,or even want to be my friend, I would be happy.
So , shall we begin?


In English, it sounds better to say "be my friend" than "make friends with me" in most instances. Similarly, it sounds better to say either "do you want to learn Chinese" OR "would you like to learn Chinese" than "would you want to learn Chinese"

Great job! I'm just learning Chinese myself, so let me know if you'd ever like to chat!


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Hello!Would you want to learn Chinese? Would you like to be my fiends?

Hello!
I come from China,I'm studying English and Japanese。
If you want to learn Chinese,or even want to make friendship with me,I will be happy.
So , shall we begin?
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Hello!Would you want to learn Chinese?Would you like to be my fiends?

Hello!
I come from China,I'm studying English and Japanese.
If you want to learn Chinese,or even want to make a fiend with me,I will be happy.
So , shall we begin?
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