NETWORK IS BROCKEN The network is brocken in my apartment, it drive me crazy. I need to down some materials about work. also writing compositions online to learn English . my rootmate must to send her new English resume to a new company GAP in China. She want to change a job and get more salary . but my computer do nothing without network. I think the reason is that someone builded their house beside my apartment,and destroy the cable. now i come to a cafe to visit italki and writing this compostion. I hope it will be repaired tomorrow.

Can u help me to check out my composition?  I am a beginer in learning English.  and i   think there are a lot of mistakes in   my compositions . but i dont know  where are they  and how to express  right.  So can  u  help me ?

SHOPPING Today is a shopping day . Today is sunday, My friend Mengsi Zhang , a girl who is 24 years old ,want to shopping . Summer is passed and Autom is coming . We want to buy some clothes. Actally, another reason,she want to have a boyfriend,and fall inlove with a boy . haha . We want to dress up ourselves . Girls are all like shopping. I had work in clothing company 6 years And most of time I work in big malls ,teaching sales how to pick clothes and match them for clients. We pricticed classified their figures and charcaters into different sorts, and require sales do the right thing to achieve their targets . I know how to make a woman looks more beauty at first sight when I see them , I really good at choosing right clothes for a girl. At last she bought two coats, a dress and a T shirt. The term "SALE " looks like "free" when girl is shopping. haha .So come on girls.Let's work hard , earn much money , fight for a new mak—up or new dresses.