About my working holiday
When I was 25 years old I
received a working holiday visa
to Australia.
Firstly I
stayed in
Brisbane, which was near my language school.
I
lived in homestay for
the first month.
I went to the language school for three months.
My English was bad and I was
in a beginner's class during
the time I was a student.
However, I could communicate with my friends, so I was satisfied, except I couldn't get
any nice jobs.
Now I feel
regretful that I didn't study hard and
didn't make a lot of friends.
I
stayed with a few friends while I lived there.
Firstly I stayed in Brisbane, which was near my language school.
I lived in homestay for the first month.
This could be written as one paragraph
For the first month I stayed in a homestay in Brisbane. It was near to the language school that I was attending.