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    August 8, 2016
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    August 6, 2016
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    Confusion chapter one When I was a senior school student,I began stuck into lots of thoughts,which cause thousands of problems in my study,further in my helth and my family.In fact,WhenI become high scool student,I almost fail to do everythings I should do .During that time, It's normal for me to get unhappy,angry,anxious easily.These incontollable and horrible emotions made me feel that I lost myself and become an evil.
    August 4, 2016
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    <blockquote>    有的句子很多余，可合并，这样表达更通顺。(It's more fluently to use one sentence than two in some way)(It's here any problom?)</blockquote>

    Self Introduction自我介绍

      你好！我的名字是是史辛蒂，是美国人。(or use 来自美国 ，相比使用两个“是”更通顺/when you use two "是" , the sentence lack of standard  )我在伊州出生，但是我住在加州。我的(更地道，standard)家有五个人:爸爸、妈妈、我的两个妹妹和我。我还有养了(It's a little stange when you use "有")一只狗。

      我上个月我在台大学中文，可是我的中文不好。我如果(Normolly,"我如果" is wrong but 如果我 is right)学习中文，我的中文进步。(???是“不过当我在学习中文时，我的中文有了进步”吗?If so,the sentence should be corrected agan:上个月我在台大学中文，虽然我中文不好，但是当学习之后，我的中文有进步了。If not …)


    在我的大学，我还学习生物学。你们应该帮我写中文。(你们可以帮我改作文吗?/你们可以帮我学写中文吗？)谢谢！

    (Thankyou for your correcting.)

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    August 4, 2016
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    You shoul use讲。Because说话emphasises the ability to talking and it has object.For example,can you说话？and can you 讲something interesting？说 is similar to讲.话 is noun.(Thank you for correcting.)
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    July 1, 2016
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