Confusion chapter one
When I was a senior school student,I began stuck into lots of thoughts,which cause thousands of problems in my study,further in my helth and my family.In fact,WhenI become high scool student,I almost fail to do everythings I should do .During that time, It's normal for me to get unhappy,angry,anxious easily.These incontollable and horrible emotions made me feel that I lost myself and become an evil.
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Hello Lai Lai,
My pleasure!
Thank you for the positive feedback.
Regards,
Giovanna
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Hello Giovanna English,Thank you for giving me a hand!Thank you so much! Then,I'm glad on an account of your generous and high praise .And,Of course, "Good job on your revision!".Yours sincerely Lai Lai.
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Hello Lai Lai,
Good job on your writing task!
I have made a few minor revisions that I hope you find useful.
Best regards,
Giovanna
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Confusion chapter one
When I was a senior in high school student, I began to get stuck into in lots of my own thoughts, which caused thousands of problems in my study studies,further as well as with in my helth health and my family. In fact, When when I become became a high scool school student, I almost failed to do everythings everything that I should do have done. During that time, It's it was normal for me to get easily become unhappy, (space) angry and anxious. easily. These incontollable uncontrollable and horrible emotions made me feel that I had lost myself and had become an evil human being.
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