1.the大问题should be大麻烦, cause大问题more like 'a big question" 大麻烦means big trouble； 2. 下午我在图书馆学习着→下午我在图书馆学习的时候 I'm studying in the library→When I was studing in the library (I‘m Sorry that my English was not that good, I cannot explain it.....) 3.夹在should be站在 夹在means stuck in, 站在means stand(between the bakery&barbershop) 4.You should delete “一直”in所以我一直回家去 its useless in this sentence 5.Maybe using 走丢 is better than 消失 in "我们的猫消失了" 消失more like disappear and 走丢 means lost 6.我把它找了在家对面的花园 → 我在家对面的花园找它 7.但是它可惜没有→ 但是可惜它不在 8.转右边→ 右转 (In China ,we use 右转 when we say turn right.) 9.Jesus..there r so many problems I want to tell u.. but its really hard for me to explaining them.. sryy