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انا لست خبير لغة لكن لو كنت مكانك كنت حكتب كتالي.. (I'm not an expert, but if I were in your spot I would write it as follow.. )
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اليوم أنا كُنت كثير نشيط. أول شيء، هديل و أنا عملنا رياضة بالصبح لمدة نص ساعة لكن الرياضة كانت صعبة. أنا تعرقت كثير. أعتقد على شان هيك الفيديو أسمو (سويت). بالعربية (العرق).بعد هذا، أنا فطرت مرة ثانية و سقنا إلى حديقة في القسم الثاني لنهر(ولامت) و مشينا هنيك بالغابة لفترة ساعة. الحديقة كانت مثل البرية في وسط المدينة. في أماكن كثيرة هيك بمدينة (بورتلاند) و أحب كثير اني أهرب إلى البرية بشكل كثير سهل. بعد المشي بالغابة، تغدينا و أنا رحت لأتزلج. بعدين، مشينا إلى حديقة بجنب نهر(ولامت). و في هادا المشي، مشينا لفترة ساعة وبسبب هادا نحنا تعبنا كثير.=======
I used bold font to show what I have changed.
You have very distinct levantine (syrian/ lebanese) spoken Arabic. My corrections were minors. I recommend using "لفترة" and "لمدة" for time. عشان، بسبب are helpful words to indicate causation. ( They are equivalent to "because, due to")
Note: In English, I assume you carried this from your native language. You were trying to be polite by mentioning the person you're with first before yourself like your usage of " هديل و أنا "
but in Arabic, It does not matter as much. You could say " أنا وهديل" because it sounds more genuine (natural).
that's all an opinion. Keep up the hard work! Good job.
0 votedJune 26, 20160- I am not a native english speaker. I have been speaking english for 5 years. I have American friends and Friends the UK. It's easy to tell the difference between American English and British English. I am sure English varies within the united kingdom, The BBC news typically uses the English from the very south of the UK. Just to be clear, The U.S. have different accents within "the American tone". I have been in " THE SOUTH ", and they speak loud and they roll their vowels ( I could not understand anything at the beginning). I think the US is big and has different " tones" based on the location. States like (N&S) Dakotas, Texas, New York, Brooklyn are all distinct tones. Note: British and American English have different words for different things like, apartment = flat, elevator = lift, exc... I hope that was informative. I'm not sure if I answered your question because your question is very general.0 votedJune 26, 20160
