يوم السبت ٢٥ حزيران ٢٠١٦

انا لست خبير لغة لكن لو كنت مكانك كنت حكتب كتالي..  (I'm not an expert, but if I were in your spot I would write it as follow.. )

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I used bold font to show what I have changed. 

You have very distinct levantine (syrian/ lebanese) spoken Arabic. My corrections were minors.  I recommend using  "لفترة" and "لمدة"  for time. عشان، بسبب are helpful words to indicate causation. ( They are equivalent to "because, due to") 

Note: In English,  I assume you carried this from your native language. You were trying  to be polite by mentioning the person you're with first before yourself like your usage of " هديل و أنا " 

but in Arabic, It does not matter as much. You could say " أنا وهديل" because it sounds more genuine (natural).  

that's all an opinion. Keep up the hard work! Good job. 

يوم السبت ٢٥ حزيران ٢٠١٦

ما شاء الله مجهود رائع استمر وبالتوفيق 

يوم السبت ٢٥ حزيران ٢٠١٦