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    Could someone correct my text please?

    Nuclear energy probably is   is probably the most powerful source of energy that we have knowledge of , also it is very besides that it is clean. From my point of view this is not a good reason to use because we don’t have a second chance with other energy procducts.

    First of all, like I have mentioned before, it’s a clean energy, it’s more clean than oil, coal and gas, and does not release greenhouse gases. It’s cheaper than any other source of energy, there are a lot of positive things.

    On the other hand, nuclear energy is extremely dangerous, any human mistake or technical failure can cause an huge catastrophe, if any accident happen we don’t have second chance. A great exemple  example is Chernobyl. In 1986 a nuclear accident in Pripyat, Ukraine and all the city was destroyed. It is now a ghost city, because the radiation still present there and some experts says that we will need about 900 years to come back live there.

    Secondly, nuclear energy can be used like a weapon, the atomic bombs, that are extremely devastating. One example we have Hiroshima and Nagasaki, both were destroyed using atomic bombs.

    Lastly, there are better options than nuclear energy such as wind energy, solar energy or water energy, because they aren’t dangerous and unlimited.

    All things considered, nuclear energy is too dangerous, and is not worth the risk. 
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    June 23, 2016
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