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Nuclear energy probably is the most powerful source of energy that we have knowledge, besides that it is cleaner. From my point of view this is not a good reason to use because we don’t have a second chance.
First of all, like I have mentioned before, it’s a clean energy, it’s cleaner than oil, coal and gas, does not release greenhouse gases, It’s cheaper than the other source of energy, there are a lot of positive things.
On the other hand, nuclear energy is extremely dangerous, any human mistake or technical failure can cause an huge catastrophe, if any accident happen we don’t have second chance. A great exemple is Chernobyl. In 1986 happened an nuclear accident in Pripyat, Ukraine and all the city was destroyed. Nowadays it’s a ghost city, because the radiation still present there and some experts says that we will need about 900 years to come back live there.
Secondly, nuclear energy can be used like a weapon, the atomic bombs, that are extremely devastating. Like an exemple we have Hiroshima e Nagasaki, both were destroyed using atomic bombs.
Lastly, there are better options than nuclear energy such as wind energy, solar energy or water energy, because they aren’t dangerous and unlimited.
All things considered, nuclear energy is too dangerous, doesn’t worth it.
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Could someone correct my text please?
Nuclear energy probably is is probably the most powerful source of energy that we have knowledge of , also it is very besides that it is clean. From my point of view this is not a good reason to use because we don’t have a second chance with other energy procducts.First of all, like I have mentioned before, it’s a clean energy, it’s more clean than oil, coal and gas, and does not release greenhouse gases. It’s cheaper than any other source of energy, there are a lot of positive things.
On the other hand, nuclear energy is extremely dangerous, any human mistake or technical failure can cause an huge catastrophe, if any accident happen we don’t have second chance. A great exemple example is Chernobyl. In 1986 a nuclear accident in Pripyat, Ukraine and all the city was destroyed. It is now a ghost city, because the radiation still present there and some experts says that we will need about 900 years to come back live there.
Secondly, nuclear energy can be used like a weapon, the atomic bombs, that are extremely devastating. One example we have Hiroshima and Nagasaki, both were destroyed using atomic bombs.
Lastly, there are better options than nuclear energy such as wind energy, solar energy or water energy, because they aren’t dangerous and unlimited.
All things considered, nuclear energy is too dangerous, and is not worth the risk.
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Could someone correct my text please?
Nuclear energy probably is the most powerful source of energy that we have knowledge of; besides that, it is cleaner. From my point of view this is not a good reason to use it because we don’t have a second chance.First of all, like I have mentioned before, it’s a clean energy. It’s cleaner than oil, coal and gas and does not release greenhouse gases. It’s cheaper than the other sources of energy, there are a lot of positive things.
On the other hand, nuclear energy is extremely dangerous. Any human mistake or technical failure can cause a huge catastrophe. If any accident happened, we don’t have second chance. A great example is Chernobyl. In 1986 happened an a nuclear accident happened in Pripyat, Ukraine and all the city was destroyed. Nowadays it’s a ghost city, because the radiation is still present there and some experts say that we will need about 900 years to come back to live there.
Secondly, nuclear energy can be used like a weapon. the Atomic bombs, that are extremely devastating. Like an For example, we have Hiroshima and Nagasaki, both were destroyed using atomic bombs.
Lastly, there are better options than nuclear energy, such as wind energy, solar energy or water energy, because they aren’t dangerous and are unlimited.
All things considered, nuclear energy is too dangerous. doesn’t It isn't worth it.
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