Dr. Türünz
Turkish
Jan 18, 2018
Çok teşekkür ederim, Denee! Türkçeni bir hayli ilerlettin. Bu süreçte sana yardımcı olmaktan mutluluk duyuyorum. İyi çalışmalar, kolay gelsin!
| Last month | Last 3 months | All time | |
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| Completed lessons | 0 | 0 | 79 |
| Attendance rate | 100% | 100% | 100% |
Sunburn :(
Today is the 5th of July of 2017. I went on a holiday with my friends a week ago. We camped in a village which is in the west of Turkey. It was a small camping area between the sea and a forest. When we arrived, there we first built our tents . They took about half an hour. After we built the tents, we went to a market to buy something. It was not too far from our camping area. While in the market, I decided to buy sunscreen. I have a light skin, but my friends stopped me and said that "You can use our cream. Don't buy it." I thought they were right. I didn't need a new one for only 2 days. And I left without sunscreen. After a good breakfast, we had fun at the sea in the morning. I like to swim very much. I was in the sea all of day. At night we drank and talked about everything at near the tents. Whatelse We passed spent 2 wonderful days with the sea and nature. After all of these this, I had a problem. My friends have dark skin and I have light skin. So their cream was not suitable for my skin. And now I have sunburned skin as like a lobster and lots of pain :.( . If you have dark skinned friends, don't use their cream. Buy a new one. :)Ching Shih
What do you imagine, when you hear the word "pirate"? A one-eyed man with a parrot on his shoulder and a wooden leg? Now, pay attention to the picture: this is Ching Shih, the Chinese sea robber who is believed to be the most successful pirate in the history. She commanded a fleet of 2000 ships and more than 70000 sailors.Very interesting to read! I did not know this.
The yellow was for corrections that must be fixed.
The pink is for word choice that was not incorrect, but is easier to understand this way.
This was a good writing! I hope that I helped.
Ich Suche ein Taxi
Hallo ! Wie geht es Ihnen ?! Ich suche ein Taxi , Wo is die nächste Taxihalstelle ? Können Sie mir helfen ?! Mein Großvater ist alt und er braucht Ihre Hilfe ?! Er braucht zum Arzt zu gehen . Danke!!Gute Arbeit Ahmed!
Großvater = Opa, aber nicht Großopa
Opa - er, Oma - sie
Einführung
Hallo!Sehr gut Rute! Das kann ich gut verstehen. Ein Paar Tipps - Eine Sprache ist schwer. Ein Stein ist hart. :) "Noch nicht" = not yet, still not.
