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Sunburn :( Today is 5 july of 2017. I went to a holiday with my friends a week ago. We camped in a village where is the west of Turkey. It is a small camping area between sea and forest. When we arrived there we built our tents firstly. They took about half an hour. After built tents we went to a market for buying something. It's not too far from our camping area. While in the market I decided to buy a suntan cream, I have a light skin, but my friends stopped me and said that "You can use our cream dont buy it."I thinked they are right, I dont need a new one for 2 days. And turned back without suntan cream. After a good breakfast. We fun with the sea in the morning. I like to swim too much. I was in the sea all of day. In the nights we drank and talked about anythink at near tents. Whatelse we passed wonderful 2 days with sea and nature. After all of these, I had a problem, my friends have dark skin and I have light skin. So their cream was not suitable for my skin. And now I have sunburned skin as like a lobster with lots of pain :.( . If you have dark skin friends, dont use their cream buy a new one. :) I hope, I didn't use offensive words. If I used please forgive me.

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Sunburn :(

Today is the 5th of July of 2017. I went on a holiday with my friends a week ago. We camped in a village which is in the west of Turkey. It was a small camping area between the sea and a forest. When we arrived, there we first built our tents . They took about half an hour. After we built the tents, we went to a market to buy something. It was not too far from our camping area. While in the market, I decided to buy sunscreen.  I have a light skin, but my friends stopped me and said that "You can use our cream.  Don't buy it."  I thought they were right.  I didn't need a new one for  only 2 days. And I left without sunscreen. After a good breakfast, we had fun at the sea in the morning. I like to swim very much. I was in the sea all of day. At night we drank and talked about everything at near the tents. Whatelse  We passed  spent 2 wonderful days with the sea and nature. After all of these this, I had a problem. My friends have dark skin and I have light skin. So their cream was not suitable for my skin. And now I have sunburned skin as like a lobster and lots of pain :.( . If you have dark skinned friends, don't use their cream.  Buy a new one. :)

Hakkı - Good work!  I hope your sunburn is feeling better.  


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