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30天中文写作挑战 (24/30) – 在法国工作
今天，我要谈一下在法国工作。
在法国， 工作是高度管制惠民。 <font style="background-color: yellow;">工作<font style="background-color: yellow;">与<font style="background-color: yellow;">人们收益息息相关（成语，意思为高度相关highly regulated to ）</font></font></font>
首先，有一个最低工资，<strike>一个月那么一千欧元</strike>。<font style="background-color: yellow;">一个月1000欧左右（around指大约）</font>
如果你工作了，可是你<font style="background-color: yellow;">被</font><font style="background-color: yellow;"></font><font style="background-color: yellow;"></font><font style="background-color: yellow;"></font>开除了， 你可以领取失业。
有两种工作合同 : 小时薪水，<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">时薪，</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font>大多一星期工作35<strike>还是</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">或</font>39小时 ，<strike>还是天薪水</strike>。<font style="background-color: yellow;">或日薪。（or常用 或）</font>
工人们通常有五个星期<strike>有偿的假</strike>，<font style="background-color: yellow;">带薪休假（常用语）</font>
要是你加班，<strike>有点</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">有时候</font>你可以有“RTT”，意义赔偿假。
我觉得法国人的<strike>改善</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">工作条件</font>很有利。
Lynn, Wrinting Chinese is really a challenge because of the numerous words and idoms. Listenning and reading Chinese articles would benefit to your study. My personal suggestion is talking to native speakers with Chinese. By using Chinese, you'll get great motivation and improvement.
Hi, today I am talking a bit about working in France. Thank you in advance for your corrections and have a great day! Here is the English translation if needed:
Today, I want to talk a bit about working in France. In France, work is highly regulated to the benefit of the people. First, there is a minimum wage, around €1000 per month. If you have worked but you have been fired, you can receive unemployment wage. There are two kinds of work contracts: hourly salary, mostly 35 or 39 hours per week, or daily salary. Workers normally get 5 weeks of paid holidays. If you work overtime, you can sometimes have “RTT”, which are compensation holidays. I think that the working conditions of French people are really convenient.0 votedJune 22, 20161Let me sing a song for you-Chinese lyrics ^^
This is my first entry in Chinese...
One of the ost's from the Meteor Shower drama series. The lyrics are so nice... please make corrections if need be. Enjoy [emoji]
让我为你唱一首歌
全世界都陪你听着
这是爱你会明白
你是唯一不可替代
让我为你唱一首歌
闭上眼睛把心交给我
这一刻
要你听见幸福的颜色...Perfect! Nothing should be corrected.
0 votedJune 17, 2016030天中文写作挑战 (20/30) – 开汽车
在法国，开汽车的最低年龄是18岁。（很好）从16岁，青年能开始驾驶课， 也对他们的父母还能开车。（和父母一起时，也能开车）
很多人有汽车。因为法国的公共交通不覆盖全境， 所以人们常常移动用汽车。（用汽车出行）其实，多数火车来来去去巴黎，所以下行（其他地方）难访问。
反之，在巴黎的旁边，很多人坐公共交通， 因为在路上有塞（路上拥堵）。
我不太喜欢汽车（不喜欢坐汽车），我常不舒服。（因为我常感觉不舒服）Your text is Great! I can tell your writing skill improving from grade 1 to 6. Keep going, and You'll achieve your learning goals soon. If You wanna get any help, just let me know.
Hi, today I have made a short text about the uses of car in France. Thank you in advance for your help, and have a nice week end! Here is the English translation :
In France, the minimum age to drive a car is 18 years old. After 16, young people can start taking driving lesson, and can also start driving with their parents. Many people have a car. As the public transportation do not cover all the territory, people often take the car to move. Indeed, most trains come and go from Paris, so the rest of the country is not easily accessible. In the opposite, most people take public transportations around Paris, because the roads are crowded. I don’t really like to take the car, because it often makes me feel uncomfortable.0 votedJune 17, 2016130天中文写作挑战 (18/30) – 在法国学习外语
人人经常说法国人不可以说外语。我觉得不是对。我觉得不对（“是”字不用，如：不能、不爱、不听、不看；后面加名词时可以用，如：不是狗、不是坏人，不是学生）
从两年及，年级，小学生开始学习英语。
中学里， 学生得点~学习第二个（改为第二门，或者去掉个）外语， 常常是德语还是（或是）西班牙语。
有时高中的学生可以有第三个外语， 还是变化他的两个外语 : 一些高中提供中文，俄语，葡萄牙人 （语）……
我学习了英语和西班牙语。
因为我的高中没有中文， 所以我在大学开始了学习中文。
我觉得后生（以后）至少可以说英文。
可是我也觉得法国教的外语部（不）很有效。
实在，老师更集中语法，与其（和）说话。与其…不如…是表达选择的，如：与其说，不如做
Today is day 18 of my challenge, I talk a bit about learning a foreign language in France. I hope you enjoy it, thank you in advance for your help! Here is the English translation :
People often say that the French cannot speak foreign languages. I think it is not true. On their second year, elementary school students begin to learn English. In middle school, students must choose a second language, often German or Spanish. Sometimes in high school, you can choose a third language, or change your second language: some high schools offer Chinese, Russian, Portuguese … I studied English and Spanish. As my high school did not have a Chinese option, I started learning Chinese is college. I think that the younger generation can at least speak English. But I also think that the French way of teaching foreign language is not very effective. Indeed, teachers will focus more on grammar, rather than focusing on speaking the language.0 votedJune 15, 20161
