What do you think about new technology?
Firstly, I would tell you
what I think about the new technology.
It's interesting each advance that there is in the own Society, but I believe that there are many advantages also.
On
the one hand, young people use mobile phones
frecuently frequently to speak with
your their friends and
they look on the internet for(
look for information on the internet). It's an useful machine, but i think it's really harmful because people (
tend to )communicate
much less with
your their family.
On the other hand, people use(
s) the laptop
to work each day and they are always connecting (
to work and connect everyday). There are a lot of disadvantages. As consequence, this
people (
person)
fell (
feel) very sad because they
is seeing the screen your laptop for many hours.(
stare at the laptop's screen for hours)
For me
is better the traditional method
( is better) because when I go out with my friends ( , ) we can speak face to face and
we keep a conversation for long hours. When I was (
a ) child I (
used to play)
played with my friends in the street, ( . )however (
However,) now children(
nowadays)
stayed (
stay ) at home playing alone or with
your (
their) own play station. That is so boring ( , ) i prefer communicate with other people
What do you think?
