What do you think about new technology?
Firstly, I would tell you I think about the new technology. It's interesting each advance that there is in the own Society, but I believe that there are many advantages also.
On the one hand, young people use mobile phones frecuently to speak with your friends and they look on the internet for. It's an useful machine, but i think it's really harmful because people communicate much less with your family.
On the other hand, people use the laptop to work each day and they are always connecting. There are a lot of disadvantages. As consequence, this people fell very sad because they is seeing the screen your laptop for many hours.
For me is better the traditional method because when I go out with my friends we can speak face to face and we keep a conversation for long hours. When I was child I played with my friends in the street, however now children stayed at home playing alone or with your own play station. That is so boring i prefer communicate with other people
What do you think?
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What do you think about the new technology?
Firstly, I would will tell you what I think about the new technology. It's Each advance is interesting each advance that there is in the own Society, but I believe that there are also many advantages also.On the one hand, young people use mobile phones frequently to speak with your their friends and they look on surf the internet for. It's an useful machine, but i also think it's really harmful because people communicate much less with your family their families.
On the other hand, people use the laptops to work each day and they are always connecting (with each other? -- or to what?). There are also a lot of disadvantages (it might be a good idea to list one or two examples here.) As a consequence, this these people fell feel very sad because they is are seeing looking at the screen your on their laptops for many hours.
For me is better the traditional method is better, because when I go out with my friends we can speak face to face and we can keep a conversation going for long many hours. When I was child I played with my friends in the street, however now children stayed stay at home playing alone or with your own their play station. That is so boring! I prefer to communicate with other people
What do you think?
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What do you think about new technology?
Firstly, I would tell you what I think about the new technology. It's interesting each advance that there is in the own Society, but I believe that there are many advantages also.On the one hand, young people use mobile phones frecuently frequently to speak with your their friends and they look on the internet for( look for information on the internet). It's an useful machine, but i think it's really harmful because people ( tend to )communicate much less with your their family.
On the other hand, people use(s) the laptop to work each day and they are always connecting ( to work and connect everyday). There are a lot of disadvantages. As consequence, this people (person) fell (feel) very sad because they is seeing the screen your laptop for many hours.(stare at the laptop's screen for hours)
For me is better the traditional method ( is better) because when I go out with my friends ( , ) we can speak face to face and we keep a conversation for long hours. When I was ( a ) child I (used to play) played with my friends in the street, ( . )however ( However,) now children( nowadays) stayed (stay ) at home playing alone or with your ( their) own play station. That is so boring ( , ) i prefer communicate with other people
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What do you think about new technology?
First, I will tell you what I think about new technology. It's interesting each advance that there is in the own Society, but I believe that there are also many advantages.On the one hand, young people use mobile phones frequently to speak with their friends. It's a useful machine, but I think it's really harmful because people communicate much less with their family.
On the other hand, people use laptops to work each day and they are always connecting with others. There are a lot of disadvantages, however. As consequence, these people feel very sad because they are seeing the laptop screen for many hours.
For me, the traditional method is better because when I go out with my friends we can speak face to face and we keep a conversation for long hours. When I was a child I played with my friends in the street, however now children stayed at home playing alone or with their own play station. That is so boring, I prefer to communicate with other people.
What do you think?
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