My amazing friend !
Yesterday morning I was waiting for my friend in the library for a long time
. I can say my friend is a voracious reader! Sometimes she reads for many hours
without doing any other thing. I think she reads indiscriminately !
She borrowed 3 books
of by eminent writer
, George Orwell
, and started to read
one of them immediately.
After 30 minutes I saw here that steeped in the book. I guess it was replete with amazing subjects .
This is very good! My changes are in yellow.
The biggest thing I saw was that there should be a comma before someone's name, as well as after (unless it's at the end of a sentence). The green portion can probably be replaced with the word "straight." I could not understand the purple portion though. Looks like it ended a period though. Great work!
