My amazing friend !
Yesterday morning I was waiting for my friend in the library for a long time , I can say my friend is a voracious reader !Sometimes she reads for many hours without doing any other thing .I think she reads indiscriminately ! she borrowed 3 books of eminent writer George Orwell and started to read on of them immediately .After 30 min I saw here that steeped in the book I guess it was replete with amazing subjects .
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My amazing friend !
Yesterday morning I was waiting for my friend in the library for a long time. I can say my friend is a voracious reader! Sometimes she reads for many hours without doing any other thing. I think she reads indiscriminately ! She borrowed 3 books of by eminent writer, George Orwell, and started to read one of them immediately. After 30 minutes I saw here that steeped in the book. I guess it was replete with amazing subjects .This is very good! My changes are in yellow.
The biggest thing I saw was that there should be a comma before someone's name, as well as after (unless it's at the end of a sentence). The green portion can probably be replaced with the word "straight." I could not understand the purple portion though. Looks like it ended a period though. Great work!
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My amazing friend !
Yesterday morning I waited for my friend in the library for a long time , I can say my friend is a voracious reader !Sometimes she reads for many hours without doing any other things .I think (that) she reads indiscriminately ! she borrowed 3 books from eminent writer George Orwell and started to read them immediately .After 30 min I saw her that steeped in the book and I guessed it was replete with amazing subjects .I don't know the meaning of those sentence ...
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My amazing friend !
Yesterday morning I was waiting for my friend in the library for a long time , I can say my friend is a voracious reader !Sometimes she reads for many hours without doing any other thing .I think she reads indiscriminately ! she borrowed 3 books of eminent writer George Orwell and started to read on of them immediately .After 30 min I saw here that steeped in the book I guess it was replete with amazing subjects .Yesterday morning, I had to wait for a friend for a long time while we were in the library. I can say (that) my friend is a voracious reader. / I can testify that my friend is a voracious reader.
Sometimes, she would read for many hours non-stop, without doing anything else. I think she reads indiscriminately / I think she is not selective when it comes to what she likes to read.
She borrowed 3 books by the eminent author George Orwell and started to read one of them immediately. After 30 minutes, I saw her looking so engrossed by what she was reading that I guessed the book must have captivated her. Maybe it is a book that is replete with interesting characters.
" Steeped in" > to have a lot of something > This school is steeped in history ( have a long history)/ This place is steeped in culture
The eminent author George Orwell > Referring to the George Orwell who is an eminent author, not anyone else by that name > My friend Jane > A friend of yours called Jane.
The eminent author, George Orwell, > referring to him as the one and only eminent author> My Mum, Jane, > Your only mum > My mum Jane > What your are saying here is that you have more than one person you call Mum > My friend, Jane > here you mean you have only one friend and she is Jane.
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