Correct? :: Hi guys im going to talk to you about my city in Korea !

Hello, thank you for opening my post.

Today, I'm going to telling you about my city in Korea :))
Im live in Busan, Korea or you can say, "I'm living in Busan, Korea." 
and My neighborhood is located near the Gwangalli beach. "the," is not necessary before stating the location, here 
All Most of people are thinking that Haeundae is the most beautiful and famous beach in Korea,
however, Busan people are going to Gwangalli instead of Haeundae.

Also, I think Gwangalli is more pretty prettier than Haeundae.

There are big bridges, good night views, many stores, cafes, pubs, ect.
Among of them, big bridges is are most pretty the prettiest at night because it turn on light their lights turn on in at night or you can say, "...turn on in the night," or  "during the night" 

I want to show it who to if foreign friends who come to Busan.

If you come here, you can drink some beer and see the good night view on the beach :-))
But maybe, these days it's pretty cold. Isn`t it ? Lol

Anyway, Busan is also a good city in Korea.
Someday,  you should come ! XD


Thank you for reading
Plz fix my wrongg sentence ~
Thank you !

You did really well! I just corrected some of your sentences, so you can sound more fluent, and so the flow could continue. Nice Job!