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Correct? :: Hi guys im going to talk to you about my city in Korea ! Hello Thank you for open my post. Today, Im going to telling you about my city in Korea :)) Im live in Busan, Korea and My neighborhood is located near the Gwangalli beach. All most of people are thinking that Haeundae is most beatiful and famous beach in Korea However Busan people are going to Gwangalli instead Haeundae. Also I think Gwangalli is more pretty than Haeundae. There are Big bridge, good night view, many stores, cafe, pub ect Among of them, Big bridge is most pretty at night because it turn on light in night I want to show it who if foreign friends come Busan. If you come here, you can drink some beer and see the good night view on the beach :-)) But maybe, these days pretty cold. Isn`t it ? Lol Anyway Busan is also good city in Korea Someday you should come ! XD Thank you for reading Plz fix my worng sentence ~ Thank you !

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CORRECTION ONLY

Hi guys!

Thank you for opening my post.

Today I will be telling you about my city in Korea :))

I live in Busan and my neighborhood is located near Gwangalli Beach.

Most people think that Haeundae is the most beautiful and famous beach in Korea.

However, more people go to Gwangalli instead of Haeundae.

I also think that Gwangalli is prettier than Haeundae.

There is a big bridge, many stores, cafes, etc.

Among them, the big bridge is the prettiest at night because the lights turn on.

I want to show it to foreign friends if they come to Busan.

If you come here, you can drink some beer and see the good night view on the beach :-))

Then again, these days it's pretty cold, isn't it lol?

Anyway, Busan is a good city and someday you should come visit! XD

CORRECTION WITH NOTES

Hi guys! I'm going to talk to you about my city in Korea!

NOTE: always use an apostrophe when using contractions for example "i am" or "will not" / ' is called an apostrophe and your words should be " i'm " or " won't "

Thank you for opening my post.

Today, I'm going to tell you about my city :))

NOTE: i would use "i will be telling you" in this situation because you already used "going to" in the sentence before and you want to try not to use the same things, but the sentence is okay.

This link will help you (verb tenses): http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/tenses.html

I live in Busan, Korea and my neighborhood is located near Gwangalli Beach.

NOTE: always capitalize names of specific places

All Most of people are thinking think that Haeundae is the most beautiful and famous beach in Korea.
However, more Busan people are going go to Gwangalli instead of Haeundae.

Also I also think that Gwangalli is more pretty prettier than Haeundae.

NOTE: you can also use "prettier" instead of "more pretty" for example "I also think that Gwangalli is prettier than Haeundae"

Here's another example: smart/smarter/smartest, "smarter = more smart" and smartest = most smart"

"You are more smart than Bomi" is the same as "You are smarter than Bomi" XD

This link will help you: https://www.englishclub.com/spelling/rules-add-er-est.htm

There are is a big bridge, good night view, many stores, cafes, etc.

NOTE: you can use cafes or cafés and when using etc. (et cetera) just know that you should only list 2-4 things

Among of them, the big bridge is the most pretty prettiest at night because it turn on light in night the lights turn on.

NOTE: good example where you can change "most pretty" to "prettiest"

I want to show it who if to foreign friends if they come Busan.

If you come here, you can drink some beer and see the good night view on the beach :-))
But maybe, these days pretty cold. Isn`t it ? Lol Then again, these days it's pretty cold, isn't it lol?

Anyway, Busan is a also good city in Korea and someday you should come visit! XD

Correct? :: Hi guys im going to talk to you about my city in Korea !

Hello, thank you for opening my post.

Today, I'm going to telling you about my city in Korea :))
Im live in Busan, Korea or you can say, "I'm living in Busan, Korea."
and My neighborhood is located near the Gwangalli beach. "the," is not necessary before stating the location, here
All Most of people are thinking that Haeundae is the most beautiful and famous beach in Korea,
however, Busan people are going to Gwangalli instead of Haeundae.

Also, I think Gwangalli is more pretty prettier than Haeundae.

There are big bridges, good night views, many stores, cafes, pubs, ect.
Among of them, big bridges is are most pretty the prettiest at night because it turn on light their lights turn on in at night or you can say, "...turn on in the night," or "during the night"

I want to show it who to if foreign friends who come to Busan.

If you come here, you can drink some beer and see the good night view on the beach :-))
But maybe, these days it's pretty cold. Isn`t it ? Lol

Anyway, Busan is also a good city in Korea.
Someday, you should come ! XD

Thank you for reading
Plz fix my wrongg sentence ~
Thank you !

You did really well! I just corrected some of your sentences, so you can sound more fluent, and so the flow could continue. Nice Job!

Correct? :: Hi guys i'm going to talk about my city in Korea !

Hello Thank you for opening my post.

Today, I'm going to tell you about my city in Korea :))
I live in Busan, Korea and my neighborhood is located near the Gwangalli beach.
Most of the people think that Haeundae is the most beautiful and famous beach in Korea.
However Busan people are going to Gwangalli instead of Haeundae.

I also think Gwangalli is prettier than Haeundae.

There are a big bridge, good night view, many stores, cafés, pubs ect.
Among of them, the big bridge is prettiest at night because it turns on light at night.

I want to show it to foreign friends if they come to Busan.

If you come here, you can drink some beer and see the good night view on the beach :-))
But maybe, these days are pretty cold. Aren't they ? Lol

Anyway Busan is also a good city in Korea
Someday you should come ! XD

Thank you for reading
Plz fix my worng sentences ~
Thank you !

Good Job! ^-^ Btw I want to visit Busan one day. So you can show me around hahaha We can also be Language Partners if you want to, since I'm studying Korean ^-^

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