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    한국으로 여행 갑시다! I'm traveling to Korea 여러분 안녕하세요. 엘리입니다 ^^ 오늘을 정말 진짜 너무 신난다!! 저와 친구랑 한국 서을으로 여행 합시다. 저희는 오랫동안 오늘 기대렸어요. 드디어 그녀 아버지 어머님 동의했어요!! 저는 한국이 너무 좋아해요. 문화 부터 연어, 음식, 음악, 예능까지 모두 좋아해요. 저는 한국어를 학습 이유는 한 한국 예능프로그램을 때문에. 바로 런닝맨 입니다! 처음 런닝맨이 봤었어, 멤버들이 이름표 이해 수 없어 때문에 너무 답답하다. 그래서 저는 한글을 공부했어요. 저는 가장좋아하는 연예인은 유재석 유느님입니다. 여러분 유재석씨가 좋습니까? 이 10월분에 한국으로 갑시다, 어디에 재일 재미있어 추천을 하 수 있어요? 너무 감사합니다 ^^ Hello everyone, this is my second post of the week. I'm trying to say I'm going to Korea in this October with my friend, and we really look forward for it. Can anyone recommend some interesting places to us? I also talked about the reason why I started learning Korean. Pls do correct my broken grammar, if you can't understand, I would love to explain to you :) Thanks so much! And 안녕히주무세요 ^^
    June 1, 2016
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    2016-6-1 日志

    你好！我想每天写日志。最近我没有（使）用（到）中文。不过我的朋友常常用中文跟我一起聊天。我的朋友用中文！我的朋友会用中文给讲我电影的情节。这些电影情节是中文！我说电影行情（？）。我的朋友听我的语音（does it mean your voice message?)后会我的朋友给我意见。我真的很快乐！而且我要说（用“念”会比较好）中文的诗！中文的诗很有意思！

    啊！最近我很高兴！昨天我看见一只蟾蜍！我很喜欢动物。那只蟾蜍很可爱了！我把它抓住它了（using passive voice sounds better)！我还拍了照。所以我有照片。(slightly redundant,) 然后我放它走了！虽然我觉得他不喜欢我，但是我喜欢它！


    It is quite a good passage, you did very well! It's good to always share this kind of short funny things that happened in your daily life. Look forward to ur next passage. Hope this helps u :)

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    June 1, 2016
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    우리 가족 (My Family) 우리가족은 넷명 있습니다. 우리아버지의 직업을 창고관리원입니다. 그는 열심히 일하다. 우리어머님은 회계원입니다. 내가 어머님의 요리를 제일 좋습니다. 저는 첫째입니다. 아래로 한 남동생있습니다. 우리는 이년차 있습니다. 친한 남매입니다. 저는 우리가족은 너무사랑습니다. I am learning Korean by myself. Tho i can understand Korean better than speaking. I am trying to challenge myself to post at least 2 short korean passages per week. My grammar is really bad, hope there are some kind souls willing to help me correct it! Thank you :)
    May 31, 2016
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    For first two questions i think are fine. For 3rd question, it can be said as 他女朋友怎麼這麼神氣instead of 生氣, cos the meaning is "how can his girlfriend be so angry" which doesn't make sense. For 4th question, you can say 他們怎麼跳得這好instead of just saying 他們怎麼這麼好(how can they be so nice). Hope this helps. For ur last question, it's quite different from 看見朋友什麼舞都會跳 (Seeing them able to dance in various style) and 看見朋友跳舞 (seeing them dancing). Because 怎麼這麼 is a feeling of amazed/surprised by smth, so the previous sentence must be smth amazing or unbelievable. ^^
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    May 31, 2016
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